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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 05:59, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
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Wrightson moved to New York in hopes of finding work with comics publishers such as DC Comics or Marvel Comics.– This is confusing because it already said earlier that he worked for Marvel and DC. This should be clarified.
tributes by colleagues and professional admirers that included Joss Whedon, Neil Gaiman, Guillermo del Toro, Walter Simonson Mike Mignola and [the dedication to John Carpenter's "The Thing Artbook" (2017)].– Who's that last one? I don't think that's a colleague or a professional admirer.
Comprehensive references in a standard references list.
[12] Woerner (2017) from LA Times is a problem. It uses lots of direct quotations and some close paraphrasing, and the "Creative legacy" section is 100% dependent on it. Overall, several quotes in the article could probably be summarized or rewritten.
Most sources seem reliable, but some need to be removed and/or replaced:
I've spot checked the following sources for plagiarism and accurate use:
Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 06:51, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
Abigail Arcane, a major supporting character in the Swamp Thing mythos was introduced in issue #3 (Feb.-March 1973).– What does this have to do with Bernie Wrightson? If he created her, the article should say so.
No neutrality issues.
No conflicts on the article or on the talk page. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 06:02, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
Both images of Wrightson are Creative Commons. One image of his artwork is used with a valid non-free use rationale, and the article would be incomplete without it. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 06:02, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 05:59, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article.
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Wrightson moved to New York in hopes of finding work with comics publishers such as DC Comics or Marvel Comics.– This is confusing because it already said earlier that he worked for Marvel and DC. This should be clarified.
tributes by colleagues and professional admirers that included Joss Whedon, Neil Gaiman, Guillermo del Toro, Walter Simonson Mike Mignola and [the dedication to John Carpenter's "The Thing Artbook" (2017)].– Who's that last one? I don't think that's a colleague or a professional admirer.
Comprehensive references in a standard references list.
[12] Woerner (2017) from LA Times is a problem. It uses lots of direct quotations and some close paraphrasing, and the "Creative legacy" section is 100% dependent on it. Overall, several quotes in the article could probably be summarized or rewritten.
Most sources seem reliable, but some need to be removed and/or replaced:
I've spot checked the following sources for plagiarism and accurate use:
Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 06:51, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
Abigail Arcane, a major supporting character in the Swamp Thing mythos was introduced in issue #3 (Feb.-March 1973).– What does this have to do with Bernie Wrightson? If he created her, the article should say so.
No neutrality issues.
No conflicts on the article or on the talk page. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 06:02, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
Both images of Wrightson are Creative Commons. One image of his artwork is used with a valid non-free use rationale, and the article would be incomplete without it. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 06:02, 30 January 2023 (UTC)