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Hello fellow Wikipedians! As part of a Wikipedia course at my medical school, I would like to make some major edits to this article. I recently did an oral presentation on awareness under anesthesia, and in reviewing this article, I have found many issues. The main ones are:
Here are my proposed changes that I'll be working on in the coming month:
I welcome any and all thoughts and suggestions you guys may have! - Ssyang1 ( talk) 23:39, 7 October 2019 (UTC)
Overall the article looks great! It discusses all of the major points of anesthesia awareness with adequate information to support each, following the recommended guidelines for medical articles.
Some suggestions include:
Great work again! Sogupta ( talk) 18:38, 21 October 2019 (UTC)
@ Elli: in this edit, you changed a grammatical sentence into one that is ungrammatical, and hard to understand. Can you fix it, please? Thanks, Mathglot ( talk) 23:40, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
Good Morning!
I am proofreading this article as part of an elective in medical school. In the lead paragraph, we mention BIS and ETCO2 monitoring. I am going to add a small part of a sentence to clarify that the BIS has not been proven to decrease the incidence of awareness as reported in Morgan & Mikhail's 7th edition. I will also add the citation.
Thank you!
Jhoy34 (
talk) 17:44, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 11 March 2024 and 22 March 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jhoy34 ( article contribs).
— Assignment last updated by Jhoy34 ( talk) 18:04, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
A fact from Anesthesia awareness appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 21 May 2004. The text of the entry was as follows:
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This article is rated B-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||
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This page has archives. Sections older than 90 days may be automatically archived by ClueBot III when more than 5 sections are present. |
Hello fellow Wikipedians! As part of a Wikipedia course at my medical school, I would like to make some major edits to this article. I recently did an oral presentation on awareness under anesthesia, and in reviewing this article, I have found many issues. The main ones are:
Here are my proposed changes that I'll be working on in the coming month:
I welcome any and all thoughts and suggestions you guys may have! - Ssyang1 ( talk) 23:39, 7 October 2019 (UTC)
Overall the article looks great! It discusses all of the major points of anesthesia awareness with adequate information to support each, following the recommended guidelines for medical articles.
Some suggestions include:
Great work again! Sogupta ( talk) 18:38, 21 October 2019 (UTC)
@ Elli: in this edit, you changed a grammatical sentence into one that is ungrammatical, and hard to understand. Can you fix it, please? Thanks, Mathglot ( talk) 23:40, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
Good Morning!
I am proofreading this article as part of an elective in medical school. In the lead paragraph, we mention BIS and ETCO2 monitoring. I am going to add a small part of a sentence to clarify that the BIS has not been proven to decrease the incidence of awareness as reported in Morgan & Mikhail's 7th edition. I will also add the citation.
Thank you!
Jhoy34 (
talk) 17:44, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 11 March 2024 and 22 March 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jhoy34 ( article contribs).
— Assignment last updated by Jhoy34 ( talk) 18:04, 19 March 2024 (UTC)