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Hello! I am happy to review this article for GA status. I will go through and make some comments as I read, and then will run through the checklist at the end, to make sure I haven't missed anything.
Canada Hky (
talk) 00:02, 15 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Initial comments
No copyvio issues.
Images all look good.
In the lead - can you explicitly call out the triad of diagnostic findings? The last sentence refers to the triad, but I had to go back and piece together what it was - something similar to the first sentence of the signs and symptoms section. Â Done
Sub out "mutation" for "variant" or "pathogenic variant". Â Done
In the "Cause" section, "mutation" is linked well after its first usage - is there a specific reason for this decision? Â Done
For the table in the "Cause" section - while the abbreviation 'ATS' is pretty easy to guess - it isn't defined in the article. Â Done
In the "Diagnosis" section - the text says "if 2/3 criteria are met", but there are 4 different criteria listed. Â Done
There is inconsistency between "long qt syndrome" and "Long QT syndrome" - I would suggest the former, as it isn't a proper noun, but it should definitely be consistent. Â Done
Reference 12 should have an access date. Â Done
I will update if I find anything else. Please let me know if there are any questions. I am going to put the article on hold for now. If you think you will need more than the standard 7 days, just let me know.
Canada Hky (
talk) 00:23, 15 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Thanks
Canada Hky. I actioned all the points you have raised above - thanks for spotting those errors. Anything else?
PeaBrainC (
talk) 09:02, 16 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Checklist
GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Physiology, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Physiology on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.PhysiologyWikipedia:WikiProject PhysiologyTemplate:WikiProject PhysiologyPhysiology articles
Hello! I am happy to review this article for GA status. I will go through and make some comments as I read, and then will run through the checklist at the end, to make sure I haven't missed anything.
Canada Hky (
talk) 00:02, 15 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Initial comments
No copyvio issues.
Images all look good.
In the lead - can you explicitly call out the triad of diagnostic findings? The last sentence refers to the triad, but I had to go back and piece together what it was - something similar to the first sentence of the signs and symptoms section. Â Done
Sub out "mutation" for "variant" or "pathogenic variant". Â Done
In the "Cause" section, "mutation" is linked well after its first usage - is there a specific reason for this decision? Â Done
For the table in the "Cause" section - while the abbreviation 'ATS' is pretty easy to guess - it isn't defined in the article. Â Done
In the "Diagnosis" section - the text says "if 2/3 criteria are met", but there are 4 different criteria listed. Â Done
There is inconsistency between "long qt syndrome" and "Long QT syndrome" - I would suggest the former, as it isn't a proper noun, but it should definitely be consistent. Â Done
Reference 12 should have an access date. Â Done
I will update if I find anything else. Please let me know if there are any questions. I am going to put the article on hold for now. If you think you will need more than the standard 7 days, just let me know.
Canada Hky (
talk) 00:23, 15 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Thanks
Canada Hky. I actioned all the points you have raised above - thanks for spotting those errors. Anything else?
PeaBrainC (
talk) 09:02, 16 September 2019 (UTC)reply
Checklist
GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)