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Reviewer: Sasata ( talk · contribs) 01:07, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Hi! Comments in a day or two ... Sasata ( talk) 01:07, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
I noticed that the peer review for this is still open; to my understanding there can't be both a good article review and peer review for an article at the same time, so you should close one or the other. Sasata ( talk) 17:18, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
Comments. First batch of comments from a fairly quick read-through, mostly prose tweaks and WP:MOS nitpicks. I'll go through again paying more attention to content and checking sources. (p.s. just noticed that you've made several changes in the past few days, and I was reading from a few-days old copy of the article, so please ignore or cross out any suggestions that are no longer applicable). Sasata ( talk) 15:37, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
Lead
Uses
Psychological effects
Contraindications
Side effects
Interactions
Pharmacology
History
I tried to keep article wikilinks at a maximum of 3 links per page, (lead+body) unless I missed some. I tended to keep a duplicate WL if it was in a section relevant to the link topic, like dopamine and DAT links in the dopamine section, or if it was in a list.
my previous updates
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Update: I may need until Friday/Saturday to complete the remaining items. Regards, Seppi333 ( talk) 16:40, 22 October 2013 (UTC) and Edited at 22:15, 22 October 2013 (UTC) and Edited a 2nd time at 00:59, 23 October 2013 (UTC). |
I finished the list - are there any items above that I didn't address to your satisfaction? Similarly, do you have any other suggestions for improving it for FA? I really appreciate the high standard you've set so far to help with the FA process - I know checking for minute details can be a pain in the ass. Seppi333 ( talk) 05:53, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
importScript('User:Dr_pda/prosesize.js');
. I don't like all the big quotes in the refs, and I would take them out.
Zad
68
02:54, 3 November 2013 (UTC)(Outdent) I may not be done with ref-formatting and checking until as late as Saturday. Sorry it's taking so long – it's going slowly because there's a handful of single sentences cited by book sources to which I don't readily have access. I also didn't initially intend to thoroughly check verifiability, but I've already found a handful of statements that are, at best, indirectly implied by sources. I'm still working to resource some of those. In the meantime, I'm hosting the sources that are WP:PAYWALLED on my google file-locker page. A handful of non-paywalled sources can also be found here for convenience. With the exception of "NP" being appended to the non-paywalled file names, all the file names reflect the ref name in the article as of now. I own some of the sources as a hard-copy textbook, so I can just take a picture and upload it if you want to check those for WP:V (namely, "Malenka_2009" and "Malenka_2009_02"). Seppi333 ( talk) 01:26, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
Edit note:
Sasata &
Zad68, let me know once you've downloaded (or if you don't wish to download) the paywalled sources – I'm not normally at liberty to publicly host them like this. Regards,
Seppi333 (
talk) 01:38, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
Seppi333 ping'd me on my User Talk page, asking for my input. Usually the first thing I do with a GA review is go over the sourcing, which I always feel is the most important thing. After a quick glance, overall I see many sources that look appropriate but some that look like they might not be. I plan on providing notes on the sourcing over the next few days (probably early next week). The GA reviewer is of course welcome to proceed without my input, but just thought I'd mention my plans. If the GA concludes before my sourcing notes are ready I'll just put them on the Talk page.
Zad
68
20:21, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
Note: I edited the lead sentence on addiction again.
Note: I'm going to check/format journal titles once I'm done with everything else, in part because I think another user might be working on that. Consequently, the status for formatting in the tab below doesn't reflect whether or not I've checked/fixed that parameter.
Note: I may update a citation (specifically, add or expand the quote) if I encounter it while editing a section later on.
Note: I'm not adding quotes to journal articles or websites that cite a very large amount of text (like the "Miller" or 5 page "FDA Effects" refs)
Current citation formatting and section
WP:V-check status
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Cite web templates: Consistent using parameters: accessdate, title, work, author (used sparingly due to frequent database citing), section or page (where relevant), url, and archiveurl/archivedate (where relevant) Cite journal templates: Consistent - handled by Boghog Cite book templates: Consistent Any citations using a different template were removed or replaced. All three groups of citation templates should be consistent as of 02:20, 5 November 2013 (UTC). Done with WP:V check Section status for WP:V check: 0 Lead- Done 1 Uses-N/A (no text) 1.1 Medical- Done 1.2 Performance-enhancing- Done 2 Contraindications- Done 3 Side effects- Done 3.1 Physical- Done 3.2 Psychological effects- Done (For common ones, almost all the positive effects came from Westfall, half the adverse effects came from Westfall and the remainder came from other sources) 4 Overdose- Done Note:Due to the probability of some people self-diagnosing on wikipedia, I thought it prudent to split this section into "moderate" and "severe" OD even though the sources did not explicitly mention which symptoms were which. I used common sense in differentiating the two sets of symptoms by ascending severity. The sources did explicitly mention the fatal OD symptoms though. Seppi333 ( talk) 05:33, 5 November 2013 (UTC) 4.1 Dependence, addiction and withdrawal- Done 4.2 Neurotoxicity- Done 4.3 Psychosis- Done 5 Interactions- Done 6 Pharmacology-N/A (no text) 6.1 Chemical properties- Done 6.2 Pharmacodynamics- Done 6.3 Pharmacokinetics- Done 6.4 Related endogenous compounds- Done 6.5 Detection in body fluids- Done 7 History, society, and culture- Done 8 Legal status- Done 9 Prodrugs- Done 10 Pharmaceutical products- Done 11 Notes-N/A 12 References-N/A 13 External links-N/A |
I don't own or have access through my university to the following references:
No access to this reflist for
WP:V
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Note: This list will expand as I work through the article. References |
Seppi333 (
talk) 22:13, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
Citation formatting nitpicks. From the first column (refs 1–46). More later. Sasata ( talk) 18:16, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
Done with this set, assuming I didn't unwittingly skip over something. Did this rather late at night. Seppi333 ( talk) 08:23, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
Figured I'd run the formatting of these by you before the new refs are added (a few more are possible, still revising the section in my sandbox):
[1]
[2]
[3]
[4] I tried to fix the types of mistakes I've made that you pointed out in the first set of edits.
I should have your second set of ref critiques fixed by (probably before) saturday.
Seppi333 (
talk) 04:45, 14 November 2013 (UTC)
References
{{
cite book}}
: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (
link)
Ok, all images have appropriate licences, the prose and MoS compliance is fine, the article is well-referenced to reliable sources (and to WP:MEDRS where appropriate), and the coverage seems to be appropriate given the fact that there are daughter articles where other relevant information is contained. The article is a certainly a solid GA, and I will promote it now. For FAC, you might consider finding an editor without knowledge of the subject matter to read through it and suggest places where the material might be too difficult. It's pretty dense material in some places (e.g. most of the Pharmacology section would be esoteric stuff for those without a biochem background), and much of the "interesting" material (to the average reader), like history, is in a different article. Good luck! Sasata ( talk) 19:38, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sasata ( talk · contribs) 01:07, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Hi! Comments in a day or two ... Sasata ( talk) 01:07, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
I noticed that the peer review for this is still open; to my understanding there can't be both a good article review and peer review for an article at the same time, so you should close one or the other. Sasata ( talk) 17:18, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
Comments. First batch of comments from a fairly quick read-through, mostly prose tweaks and WP:MOS nitpicks. I'll go through again paying more attention to content and checking sources. (p.s. just noticed that you've made several changes in the past few days, and I was reading from a few-days old copy of the article, so please ignore or cross out any suggestions that are no longer applicable). Sasata ( talk) 15:37, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
Lead
Uses
Psychological effects
Contraindications
Side effects
Interactions
Pharmacology
History
I tried to keep article wikilinks at a maximum of 3 links per page, (lead+body) unless I missed some. I tended to keep a duplicate WL if it was in a section relevant to the link topic, like dopamine and DAT links in the dopamine section, or if it was in a list.
my previous updates
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Update: I may need until Friday/Saturday to complete the remaining items. Regards, Seppi333 ( talk) 16:40, 22 October 2013 (UTC) and Edited at 22:15, 22 October 2013 (UTC) and Edited a 2nd time at 00:59, 23 October 2013 (UTC). |
I finished the list - are there any items above that I didn't address to your satisfaction? Similarly, do you have any other suggestions for improving it for FA? I really appreciate the high standard you've set so far to help with the FA process - I know checking for minute details can be a pain in the ass. Seppi333 ( talk) 05:53, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
importScript('User:Dr_pda/prosesize.js');
. I don't like all the big quotes in the refs, and I would take them out.
Zad
68
02:54, 3 November 2013 (UTC)(Outdent) I may not be done with ref-formatting and checking until as late as Saturday. Sorry it's taking so long – it's going slowly because there's a handful of single sentences cited by book sources to which I don't readily have access. I also didn't initially intend to thoroughly check verifiability, but I've already found a handful of statements that are, at best, indirectly implied by sources. I'm still working to resource some of those. In the meantime, I'm hosting the sources that are WP:PAYWALLED on my google file-locker page. A handful of non-paywalled sources can also be found here for convenience. With the exception of "NP" being appended to the non-paywalled file names, all the file names reflect the ref name in the article as of now. I own some of the sources as a hard-copy textbook, so I can just take a picture and upload it if you want to check those for WP:V (namely, "Malenka_2009" and "Malenka_2009_02"). Seppi333 ( talk) 01:26, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
Edit note:
Sasata &
Zad68, let me know once you've downloaded (or if you don't wish to download) the paywalled sources – I'm not normally at liberty to publicly host them like this. Regards,
Seppi333 (
talk) 01:38, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
Seppi333 ping'd me on my User Talk page, asking for my input. Usually the first thing I do with a GA review is go over the sourcing, which I always feel is the most important thing. After a quick glance, overall I see many sources that look appropriate but some that look like they might not be. I plan on providing notes on the sourcing over the next few days (probably early next week). The GA reviewer is of course welcome to proceed without my input, but just thought I'd mention my plans. If the GA concludes before my sourcing notes are ready I'll just put them on the Talk page.
Zad
68
20:21, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
Note: I edited the lead sentence on addiction again.
Note: I'm going to check/format journal titles once I'm done with everything else, in part because I think another user might be working on that. Consequently, the status for formatting in the tab below doesn't reflect whether or not I've checked/fixed that parameter.
Note: I may update a citation (specifically, add or expand the quote) if I encounter it while editing a section later on.
Note: I'm not adding quotes to journal articles or websites that cite a very large amount of text (like the "Miller" or 5 page "FDA Effects" refs)
Current citation formatting and section
WP:V-check status
|
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Cite web templates: Consistent using parameters: accessdate, title, work, author (used sparingly due to frequent database citing), section or page (where relevant), url, and archiveurl/archivedate (where relevant) Cite journal templates: Consistent - handled by Boghog Cite book templates: Consistent Any citations using a different template were removed or replaced. All three groups of citation templates should be consistent as of 02:20, 5 November 2013 (UTC). Done with WP:V check Section status for WP:V check: 0 Lead- Done 1 Uses-N/A (no text) 1.1 Medical- Done 1.2 Performance-enhancing- Done 2 Contraindications- Done 3 Side effects- Done 3.1 Physical- Done 3.2 Psychological effects- Done (For common ones, almost all the positive effects came from Westfall, half the adverse effects came from Westfall and the remainder came from other sources) 4 Overdose- Done Note:Due to the probability of some people self-diagnosing on wikipedia, I thought it prudent to split this section into "moderate" and "severe" OD even though the sources did not explicitly mention which symptoms were which. I used common sense in differentiating the two sets of symptoms by ascending severity. The sources did explicitly mention the fatal OD symptoms though. Seppi333 ( talk) 05:33, 5 November 2013 (UTC) 4.1 Dependence, addiction and withdrawal- Done 4.2 Neurotoxicity- Done 4.3 Psychosis- Done 5 Interactions- Done 6 Pharmacology-N/A (no text) 6.1 Chemical properties- Done 6.2 Pharmacodynamics- Done 6.3 Pharmacokinetics- Done 6.4 Related endogenous compounds- Done 6.5 Detection in body fluids- Done 7 History, society, and culture- Done 8 Legal status- Done 9 Prodrugs- Done 10 Pharmaceutical products- Done 11 Notes-N/A 12 References-N/A 13 External links-N/A |
I don't own or have access through my university to the following references:
No access to this reflist for
WP:V
|
---|
Note: This list will expand as I work through the article. References |
Seppi333 (
talk) 22:13, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
Citation formatting nitpicks. From the first column (refs 1–46). More later. Sasata ( talk) 18:16, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
Done with this set, assuming I didn't unwittingly skip over something. Did this rather late at night. Seppi333 ( talk) 08:23, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
Figured I'd run the formatting of these by you before the new refs are added (a few more are possible, still revising the section in my sandbox):
[1]
[2]
[3]
[4] I tried to fix the types of mistakes I've made that you pointed out in the first set of edits.
I should have your second set of ref critiques fixed by (probably before) saturday.
Seppi333 (
talk) 04:45, 14 November 2013 (UTC)
References
{{
cite book}}
: CS1 maint: multiple names: authors list (
link)
Ok, all images have appropriate licences, the prose and MoS compliance is fine, the article is well-referenced to reliable sources (and to WP:MEDRS where appropriate), and the coverage seems to be appropriate given the fact that there are daughter articles where other relevant information is contained. The article is a certainly a solid GA, and I will promote it now. For FAC, you might consider finding an editor without knowledge of the subject matter to read through it and suggest places where the material might be too difficult. It's pretty dense material in some places (e.g. most of the Pharmacology section would be esoteric stuff for those without a biochem background), and much of the "interesting" material (to the average reader), like history, is in a different article. Good luck! Sasata ( talk) 19:38, 30 November 2013 (UTC)