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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
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The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk) 23:10, 26 March 2022 (UTC)reply
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
Other problems: - ?
QPQ: Done.
Overall: thanks for an interesting submission. the hooks just need a bit of work. both ALT0 and ALT1 are both currently in present tense, but the person is dead therefore it needs to be past tense (ie could not can). both sentences could be made snappier, eg i'd prefer "made" for "conferred". lastly, "12th recipient of Tipiṭakadhara Dhammabhaṇḍāgārika" is cited here but we all need the cite on the ALTs for "memorize and recite all pages of the Tipiṭaka"
Mujinga (
talk) 15:57, 22 February 2022 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review,
Mujinga. I would fix the hook as follows.
Htanaungg (
talk) 03:36, 23 February 2022 (UTC)reply
ALT2 ... that Abhijātābhivaṃsa was made as the 12th recipient of
Tipiṭakadhara Dhammabhaṇḍāgārika, for he could memorize and recite all pages of the
Tipiṭaka? Source: (Mya Than San 2020: p. 434-5) for "12th recipient" and (The Mirror 2007) for "memorize and recite all pages of the Tipiṭaka"
Hi Htanaungg I'm guessing you are not a native english speaker because some readability issues remain with the present ALTs, so I'll simply propose a new ALT and ask for a second reviewer, please correct any errors I've introduced. There's also an issue whether it should be 12th or twelfth, for me the
guidance is unclear on that.
The content of these hooks is not present in the article; it says that he "recit[ed] the Canon without being prompted more than five times in a day", and it later says, without connection, that he "was offered the title of Tipiṭakadhara Dhammabhaṇḍāgārika by the Burmese government". If he was offered this title because of his memorization of this text, then the article should make that clear. -
Bryan Rutherford (
talk) 16:18, 24 February 2022 (UTC)reply
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A fact from Abhijatabhivamsa appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the Did you know column on 3 April 2022 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk) 23:10, 26 March 2022 (UTC)reply
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
Interesting:
Other problems: - ?
QPQ: Done.
Overall: thanks for an interesting submission. the hooks just need a bit of work. both ALT0 and ALT1 are both currently in present tense, but the person is dead therefore it needs to be past tense (ie could not can). both sentences could be made snappier, eg i'd prefer "made" for "conferred". lastly, "12th recipient of Tipiṭakadhara Dhammabhaṇḍāgārika" is cited here but we all need the cite on the ALTs for "memorize and recite all pages of the Tipiṭaka"
Mujinga (
talk) 15:57, 22 February 2022 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review,
Mujinga. I would fix the hook as follows.
Htanaungg (
talk) 03:36, 23 February 2022 (UTC)reply
ALT2 ... that Abhijātābhivaṃsa was made as the 12th recipient of
Tipiṭakadhara Dhammabhaṇḍāgārika, for he could memorize and recite all pages of the
Tipiṭaka? Source: (Mya Than San 2020: p. 434-5) for "12th recipient" and (The Mirror 2007) for "memorize and recite all pages of the Tipiṭaka"
Hi Htanaungg I'm guessing you are not a native english speaker because some readability issues remain with the present ALTs, so I'll simply propose a new ALT and ask for a second reviewer, please correct any errors I've introduced. There's also an issue whether it should be 12th or twelfth, for me the
guidance is unclear on that.
The content of these hooks is not present in the article; it says that he "recit[ed] the Canon without being prompted more than five times in a day", and it later says, without connection, that he "was offered the title of Tipiṭakadhara Dhammabhaṇḍāgārika by the Burmese government". If he was offered this title because of his memorization of this text, then the article should make that clear. -
Bryan Rutherford (
talk) 16:18, 24 February 2022 (UTC)reply