900 West Randolph was a Art and architecture good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | ||||||||||
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900 West Randolph, Chicago's first high-rise building built by a black-owned construction firm, has penthouses that can be rented for over $20,000 per month? |
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According to the blog https://buildingupchicago.com/2022/03/24/900-randolph-has-gone-3d-in-the-west-loop/, the following dates are part of the history of this building:
- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 12:33, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29 (
talk) 14:54, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
Created by TonyTheTiger ( talk). Self-nominated at 03:35, 11 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/900 West Randolph; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Policy compliance:
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Good article. The phrase "presented at 43 stories" reads a little awkward to me. Great photos here. If we're using the photos with the hook, we'll need a (pictured) in there somewhere. gobonobo + c 16:49, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Rublov ( talk · contribs) 12:57, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
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TonyTheTiger, thank you for preparing this article for GA. I am putting the review on hold pending your response to my comments above. rblv ( talk) 14:05, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
@ TonyTheTiger: Thank you for getting back to me, but I'm afraid that after a month it's time for me to close this review. I have found that the article still does not meet criteria (1) and (3), particularly in the "History" section, which needs a thorough copy-edit and culling of unnecessary detail.
The building is situated in the section of Randolph Street known as Restaurant Row.– odd digression from discussing the building's permitting process
for the project that was to be taller than anything west of Halsted– this feels like a detail that's tacked on to an unrelated sentence
that avails additional contiguous footage– I don't think this use of 'avails' is grammatical.
Thus, it has official billing as "the city's first high-rise with an African American Minority Business Enterprise co-leading construction".– kind of repeats the previous sentence; should be integrated better
with 300 residential units and 220 parking spaces(referring to one of many intermediate design proposals, not the final building)
The first renderings of the building were unveiled at the beginning of February 2018 with a 170 North Peoria address.
according to June 2018 correspondences with 27th Ward Alderman Walter Burnett
The building permit for the project was issued to LR Contracting Company
2,358–3,418 square feet (219.1–317.5 m2) with 12-foot-high (3.7 m) ceilings
I appreciate your work on the article and hope that it will become a GA in the future. rblv ( talk) 02:09, 26 October 2023 (UTC)
900 West Randolph was a Art and architecture good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | ||||||||||
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fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
August 13, 2023. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
900 West Randolph, Chicago's first high-rise building built by a black-owned construction firm, has penthouses that can be rented for over $20,000 per month? |
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According to the blog https://buildingupchicago.com/2022/03/24/900-randolph-has-gone-3d-in-the-west-loop/, the following dates are part of the history of this building:
- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 12:33, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
AirshipJungleman29 (
talk) 14:54, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
Created by TonyTheTiger ( talk). Self-nominated at 03:35, 11 July 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/900 West Randolph; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
Policy compliance:
Hook eligibility:
QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Good article. The phrase "presented at 43 stories" reads a little awkward to me. Great photos here. If we're using the photos with the hook, we'll need a (pictured) in there somewhere. gobonobo + c 16:49, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Rublov ( talk · contribs) 12:57, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
GA criteria:
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TonyTheTiger, thank you for preparing this article for GA. I am putting the review on hold pending your response to my comments above. rblv ( talk) 14:05, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
@ TonyTheTiger: Thank you for getting back to me, but I'm afraid that after a month it's time for me to close this review. I have found that the article still does not meet criteria (1) and (3), particularly in the "History" section, which needs a thorough copy-edit and culling of unnecessary detail.
The building is situated in the section of Randolph Street known as Restaurant Row.– odd digression from discussing the building's permitting process
for the project that was to be taller than anything west of Halsted– this feels like a detail that's tacked on to an unrelated sentence
that avails additional contiguous footage– I don't think this use of 'avails' is grammatical.
Thus, it has official billing as "the city's first high-rise with an African American Minority Business Enterprise co-leading construction".– kind of repeats the previous sentence; should be integrated better
with 300 residential units and 220 parking spaces(referring to one of many intermediate design proposals, not the final building)
The first renderings of the building were unveiled at the beginning of February 2018 with a 170 North Peoria address.
according to June 2018 correspondences with 27th Ward Alderman Walter Burnett
The building permit for the project was issued to LR Contracting Company
2,358–3,418 square feet (219.1–317.5 m2) with 12-foot-high (3.7 m) ceilings
I appreciate your work on the article and hope that it will become a GA in the future. rblv ( talk) 02:09, 26 October 2023 (UTC)