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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk · contribs) 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Basic stuff and comments

• Archive all archivable sources (recommend using this tool). Some Dude From North Carolina ^{wanna talk?} 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC) reply

 Done Chompy Ace 00:21, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• Lead is great. Some Dude From North Carolina ^{wanna talk?} 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC) reply

 Done Chompy Ace 00:56, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• I suggest moving the 3rd reference to the end of the sentence. Some Dude From North Carolina ^{wanna talk?} 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC) reply

 Done Chompy Ace 00:38, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• The quote from the last sentence in "Summary and production" is from this source, not the one currently being used. Some Dude From North Carolina ^{wanna talk?} 19:51, 4 December 2020 (UTC) reply

 Done, source and reference have changed Chompy Ace 00:31, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• The following sentences need references (or need references moved to the end of the sentence):

• "A viewer counted Didit blinking 362 times."

 Done Chompy Ace 00:47, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• "Didit originally planned for the video to be only 10 minutes long..."

 Done, removed partial sentences that are unneeded Chompy Ace 00:55, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• "Several Internet memes were published on Facebook and Instagram."

 Done sentence removed as unnecessary Chompy Ace 00:48, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• "...with the number of downloads reaching 10,000 as of early August."

 Done, sentence within the Video game adaptation section has removed Chompy Ace 00:52, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• The following sentences need rephrasing (since they should all be in past-tense):

• Change "is shot" to "was shot"

 Done Chompy Ace 00:32, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• Change "the video is a sarcastic commentary" to "the video was a sarcastic commentary"

 Done Chompy Ace 00:34, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• Change "video is only meant for" to "video was only meant for"

 Done Chompy Ace 00:35, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• I suggest removing the "2020 films" category since this really isn't a "film". Some Dude From North Carolina ^{wanna talk?} 22:12, 4 December 2020 (UTC) reply

 Done, removed per WP:NOTDEFINING Chompy Ace 00:23, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

Some Dude From North Carolina, may I ask why is the Adaptation section removed? It is significant to know that the video has been adapted to a game, and it is supported by a reliable source. Gerald WL 01:05, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

• @ Gerald Waldo Luis: It wasn't removed when I started my review. Feel free to bring it back. Some Dude From North Carolina ^{wanna talk?} 01:16, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

@ Some Dude From North Carolina: Surprise! Chompy Ace 02:07, 5 December 2020 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR): d ( copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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