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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Cfl013. Peer reviewers: Cfl013.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 16:35, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Overall, the viewpoints are pretty well presented. However, in "Contaminated buildings" and "Reaction", the viewpoints are underrepresented. In "Contaminated buildings," it just literally listed out the contaminated buildings without explaining the situation and data. In "Reaction", it didn't mention the responsible individuals and organizations after several investigations have been done. Cfl013 ( talk) 03:48, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
Most of the sources are from creditable organizations like South China Morning Post and government websites like www.info.gov.hk. However, There are a few biased sources there without being noted. Two of the sources, Apple Daily and Orientaldaily.on.cc are well known as opposing the "Pro-Establishment Camp." For example, in the thirty-first source,"林鄭被批鉛禍無究責 道歉欠奉 – 東方日報" by orientaldaily.on.cc, Carrie Lam Cheng Yuet-ngor, a "Pro-Establishment Camp" politician is criticized. Cfl013 ( talk) 03:49, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
The viewpoint, Palliative measures, is very underrepresented. The government did a lot more than the ones stated. Government departments like Transport and Housing Bureau, Water Supplies Department, Housing Department, have done several Palliative measures regarding to the incidents, but they are not mentioned at all. Cfl013 ( talk) 03:59, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
This article was previously titled "Lead in Drinking Water Incidents". This was not compliant with WP:TITLE for the following reasons:
The new title isn't especially elegant, so it's fine if consensus decides a different name is better, but it should at least address the above concerns. Hairy Dude ( talk) 20:14, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
For some reason Lead in Drinking Water Incidents, which I presume was meant to be a list at some point, is now redirecting here, which I believe might be unintended. Any idea how to fix this or if the old article/list it used to reference can be recovered (assuming it existed in the first place)? 66.81.165.113 ( talk) 00:20, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Cfl013. Peer reviewers: Cfl013.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 16:35, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Overall, the viewpoints are pretty well presented. However, in "Contaminated buildings" and "Reaction", the viewpoints are underrepresented. In "Contaminated buildings," it just literally listed out the contaminated buildings without explaining the situation and data. In "Reaction", it didn't mention the responsible individuals and organizations after several investigations have been done. Cfl013 ( talk) 03:48, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
Most of the sources are from creditable organizations like South China Morning Post and government websites like www.info.gov.hk. However, There are a few biased sources there without being noted. Two of the sources, Apple Daily and Orientaldaily.on.cc are well known as opposing the "Pro-Establishment Camp." For example, in the thirty-first source,"林鄭被批鉛禍無究責 道歉欠奉 – 東方日報" by orientaldaily.on.cc, Carrie Lam Cheng Yuet-ngor, a "Pro-Establishment Camp" politician is criticized. Cfl013 ( talk) 03:49, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
The viewpoint, Palliative measures, is very underrepresented. The government did a lot more than the ones stated. Government departments like Transport and Housing Bureau, Water Supplies Department, Housing Department, have done several Palliative measures regarding to the incidents, but they are not mentioned at all. Cfl013 ( talk) 03:59, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
This article was previously titled "Lead in Drinking Water Incidents". This was not compliant with WP:TITLE for the following reasons:
The new title isn't especially elegant, so it's fine if consensus decides a different name is better, but it should at least address the above concerns. Hairy Dude ( talk) 20:14, 10 April 2023 (UTC)
For some reason Lead in Drinking Water Incidents, which I presume was meant to be a list at some point, is now redirecting here, which I believe might be unintended. Any idea how to fix this or if the old article/list it used to reference can be recovered (assuming it existed in the first place)? 66.81.165.113 ( talk) 00:20, 15 April 2023 (UTC)