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Reviewer: Casliber ( talk · contribs) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below:
Cas Liber (
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They had previously won 11, a joint record with United, most recently last season's final against Hull City.- "last season's" makes it sound like 2020...however "previous" is repetitive....hmmm...how about "Of these, they had won 11, a joint record with United, most recently the previous season's final against Hull City." or somesuch.
The game was watched by an average of 8 million viewers on BBC One and a peak of 8.8 million- reads oddly
The Football Association charged him with misconduct.....aaaand the punishment was....?
- Earwig's copyvio okay - false positive due to some quotes.
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a couple of minor prose issues. Fixed a couple of typoes I couldn't be arsed noting here (and were straightforward). Nice work. Cas Liber ( talk · contribs) 09:05, 14 July 2021 (UTC)- Casliber thanks very much, I think I've addressed your concerns, but do let me know if there's more I can do. Cheers. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Casliber ( talk · contribs) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
Hi - I'll make copyedits as I go (please revert if I inadvertently change the meaning) and jot queries below:
Cas Liber (
talk ·
contribs) 08:38, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
They had previously won 11, a joint record with United, most recently last season's final against Hull City.- "last season's" makes it sound like 2020...however "previous" is repetitive....hmmm...how about "Of these, they had won 11, a joint record with United, most recently the previous season's final against Hull City." or somesuch.
The game was watched by an average of 8 million viewers on BBC One and a peak of 8.8 million- reads oddly
The Football Association charged him with misconduct.....aaaand the punishment was....?
- Earwig's copyvio okay - false positive due to some quotes.
1. Well written?:
- Prose quality:
-
Manual of Style compliance:
2. Factually accurate and verifiable?:
- References to sources:
- Citations to reliable sources, where required:
-
No original research:
3. Broad in coverage?:
- Major aspects:
- Focused:
4. Reflects a neutral point of view?:
- Fair representation without bias:
5. Reasonably stable?
- No edit wars, etc. (Vandalism does not count against GA):
6. Illustrated by images, when possible and appropriate?:
- Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
- Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
- Pass or Fail: -
a couple of minor prose issues. Fixed a couple of typoes I couldn't be arsed noting here (and were straightforward). Nice work. Cas Liber ( talk · contribs) 09:05, 14 July 2021 (UTC)- Casliber thanks very much, I think I've addressed your concerns, but do let me know if there's more I can do. Cheers. The Rambling Man ( Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:09, 14 July 2021 (UTC)