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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 04:27, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
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Your style runs on the dense side, but covering 56 cars in multiple classifications going around a track for 24 hours will do that. A lot of comma fixing and little things, but the sourcing came back clean. Let me know when you've cleaned this up.
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The 55 accepted cars that will participate in the qualifying sessions June 9-10 will include 21 LMP1 cars, nine LMP2 cars, eight GT1 entries and 17 GT2 machines.
In addition though our friends at Endurance-Info.com have established that the second LMP car on the list, the Tokai University Courage-YGK, has also been withdrawn, the University based team choosing to concentrate on 2011 and a hybrid powertrain instead!
devant la n°3 de Simon Pagenaud en 3.23.593 mn
The Highcroft Racing HPD ARX.01 team had to settle for second. "I'm very happy, because we made a lot of progress since yesterday," David Brabham concluded. "At the end I had a go on another qualifying lap, but there was too much traffic and then I out braked myself at the first chicane."
Idem pour la Corvette C6.R Team Luc Alphand Aventures qui elle a crevé à l'arrière gauche.
Even before the start, the #80 Flying Lizard Porsche 911 encountered trouble when a screw on the track caused a rear tire puncture.
The eight-time winner ran into the gravel at the Porsche Curves as he tried to go around the outside of Priaulx's slow-moving BMW M3, which was recovering to the pits with a front-let puncture.
First, Manuel Rodrigues in the #14 Kolles Audi R10 hits the barrier hard with the left front at the right kink before Indianapolis - he brings it to the pits but there is quite a lot of damage.
The battle for the lead in LMP2 was also affected by a trip through the gravel for second-placed Marino Franchitti at the top of the hour. It wasn't his fault though, having suffered the car's third puncture of the race. The problem cost Highcroft two and a half laps, handing some breathing space to long-time leader Danny Watts in the Strakka Acura.
Audi claimed a shock 1-2-3 victory in this year's Le Mans 24 Hours after Peugeot suffered a catastrophic collapse from the stronghold it enjoyed early in the race. ... Romain Dumas, Timo Bernhard and Mike Rockenfeller clinched their maiden Le Mans victories in their first year together
The Saleen wins in the last Le Mans 24 Hours for the class - ironically, the first win here for the S7R. That win is Larbre Competition's fifth class win at Le Mans.
Earwig catches primarily an article from DSC—but it's a table of the event results. That's not a copyvio issue: that's just too many of the same names in the same places. Most other items caught are attributed quotes.
The article contains seven Creative Commons-licensed images with no issues and useful captions. Encouragement: Add alt text.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Your style runs on the dense side, but covering 56 cars in multiple classifications going around a track for 24 hours will do that. A lot of comma fixing and little things, but the sourcing came back clean. Let me know when you've cleaned this up.
Sammi Brie (she/her •
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c) 04:57, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
The 55 accepted cars that will participate in the qualifying sessions June 9-10 will include 21 LMP1 cars, nine LMP2 cars, eight GT1 entries and 17 GT2 machines.
In addition though our friends at Endurance-Info.com have established that the second LMP car on the list, the Tokai University Courage-YGK, has also been withdrawn, the University based team choosing to concentrate on 2011 and a hybrid powertrain instead!
devant la n°3 de Simon Pagenaud en 3.23.593 mn
The Highcroft Racing HPD ARX.01 team had to settle for second. "I'm very happy, because we made a lot of progress since yesterday," David Brabham concluded. "At the end I had a go on another qualifying lap, but there was too much traffic and then I out braked myself at the first chicane."
Idem pour la Corvette C6.R Team Luc Alphand Aventures qui elle a crevé à l'arrière gauche.
Even before the start, the #80 Flying Lizard Porsche 911 encountered trouble when a screw on the track caused a rear tire puncture.
The eight-time winner ran into the gravel at the Porsche Curves as he tried to go around the outside of Priaulx's slow-moving BMW M3, which was recovering to the pits with a front-let puncture.
First, Manuel Rodrigues in the #14 Kolles Audi R10 hits the barrier hard with the left front at the right kink before Indianapolis - he brings it to the pits but there is quite a lot of damage.
The battle for the lead in LMP2 was also affected by a trip through the gravel for second-placed Marino Franchitti at the top of the hour. It wasn't his fault though, having suffered the car's third puncture of the race. The problem cost Highcroft two and a half laps, handing some breathing space to long-time leader Danny Watts in the Strakka Acura.
Audi claimed a shock 1-2-3 victory in this year's Le Mans 24 Hours after Peugeot suffered a catastrophic collapse from the stronghold it enjoyed early in the race. ... Romain Dumas, Timo Bernhard and Mike Rockenfeller clinched their maiden Le Mans victories in their first year together
The Saleen wins in the last Le Mans 24 Hours for the class - ironically, the first win here for the S7R. That win is Larbre Competition's fifth class win at Le Mans.
Earwig catches primarily an article from DSC—but it's a table of the event results. That's not a copyvio issue: that's just too many of the same names in the same places. Most other items caught are attributed quotes.
The article contains seven Creative Commons-licensed images with no issues and useful captions. Encouragement: Add alt text.