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In the lead, "The game took place on October 4, 1948 between the Cleveland Indians and Boston Red Sox" ---> "The game took place on October 4, 1948, between the Cleveland Indians and Boston Red Sox", commas after dates, if using MDY. [In the lead], please link "American League" once. In the Game summary section, please link "Eddie Robinson" to its correspondence article, as at the moment it stands out as a disambiguation. In the Aftermath section, second paragraph and the beginning of the sentence, do you mean "The Red Sox's"?
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Fixes made. Easy changes to make at least, was worried I was slacking on a part or something.
WizardmanOperation Big Bear 02:59, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
One more minor thing to do. No, everything read well, so you don't have to worry about that. :) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 14:41, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
American League is linked at the end of the first paragraph; or do I need to link it elsewhere too?
WizardmanOperation Big Bear 16:24, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
It's linked twice; in the beginning and end of the first paragraph of the lead. --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 16:34, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
-facepalm- fixed now. I thought you meant it wasn't linked at all at first, lol.
WizardmanOperation Big Bear 17:06, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
Actually, it's my fault for not explaining it better. I'm just glad it's dealt with. Anyways, thank you to Wizardman for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 17:13, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
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In the lead, "The game took place on October 4, 1948 between the Cleveland Indians and Boston Red Sox" ---> "The game took place on October 4, 1948, between the Cleveland Indians and Boston Red Sox", commas after dates, if using MDY. [In the lead], please link "American League" once. In the Game summary section, please link "Eddie Robinson" to its correspondence article, as at the moment it stands out as a disambiguation. In the Aftermath section, second paragraph and the beginning of the sentence, do you mean "The Red Sox's"?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Fixes made. Easy changes to make at least, was worried I was slacking on a part or something.
WizardmanOperation Big Bear 02:59, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
One more minor thing to do. No, everything read well, so you don't have to worry about that. :) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 14:41, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
American League is linked at the end of the first paragraph; or do I need to link it elsewhere too?
WizardmanOperation Big Bear 16:24, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
It's linked twice; in the beginning and end of the first paragraph of the lead. --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 16:34, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
-facepalm- fixed now. I thought you meant it wasn't linked at all at first, lol.
WizardmanOperation Big Bear 17:06, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply
Actually, it's my fault for not explaining it better. I'm just glad it's dealt with. Anyways, thank you to Wizardman for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --
ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 17:13, 16 June 2010 (UTC)reply