1920 Rock Island Independents season was nominated as a Sports and recreation good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (April 26, 2013). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Reviewer: Shudde ( talk · contribs) 10:34, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
I am in the process of reviewing this article. I'll make sure the review is posted in the next day or two. - Shudde talk 10:34, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
I'll add problems or questions I have regarding the article first, then I'll specifically address each of the specific Wikipedia:Good article criteria. Bear with me, I'll try and get through everything as quickly as I can. Once I've finished commenting, I usually allow a week to address the comments, however I'm happy to extend that within reason:
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I'll add the rest of my comments soon. - Shudde talk 10:37, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
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Wikipedia:Good article criteria
1. Well-written
2. Verifiable with no original research
3. Broad in its coverage:
4. Neutral
5. Stable
6. Illustrated, if possible, by images
Congratulations on the work that's been put into the article. I think it's in a position to fulfil the criteria within a reasonable time-period (was thinking one week, two max). I'm going to place this article on hold. I'll check back in a week. If you want any more feedback/clarification then just ping me on my talk page and I'll try and answer reasonably promptly. - Shudde talk 11:25, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
Additional comments Something I forgot to add when I did my initial review. This influences the broadness of the article. I know that the teams would create their schedules dynamically as the season went on, but there is not information regarding Douglas Park (Rock Island) — for example it was obviously shared with other sports teams. Even more importantly, why did they play all but one of their matches at "Home"? Did other teams use this as their home ground as well, or was this simply a quirky result of the dynamic scheduling? - Shudde talk 02:03, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
There are basically two things which still need to be done for this article to pass. One is that the lead needs to be cleaned up—the language doesn't read particularly well, and could also do with a bit of an expansion. The second is the match in January 1921 which has not been included; considering the short length of the season, I think omitting this means that the article doesn't meet the "broad" criteria. Considering it's relative insignificance, I don't think much needs to be said about it. The article has been on hold for a while, so I'll give it another 3-4 days for these things to be fixed. Otherwise I'll fail it, and it can be renominated once those two things are addressed. - Shudde talk 04:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
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1920 Rock Island Independents season was nominated as a Sports and recreation good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (April 26, 2013). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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Reviewer: Shudde ( talk · contribs) 10:34, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
I am in the process of reviewing this article. I'll make sure the review is posted in the next day or two. - Shudde talk 10:34, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
I'll add problems or questions I have regarding the article first, then I'll specifically address each of the specific Wikipedia:Good article criteria. Bear with me, I'll try and get through everything as quickly as I can. Once I've finished commenting, I usually allow a week to address the comments, however I'm happy to extend that within reason:
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I'll add the rest of my comments soon. - Shudde talk 10:37, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
Images:
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References:
- Shudde talk 11:03, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
- Shudde talk 11:11, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
Wikipedia:Good article criteria
1. Well-written
2. Verifiable with no original research
3. Broad in its coverage:
4. Neutral
5. Stable
6. Illustrated, if possible, by images
Congratulations on the work that's been put into the article. I think it's in a position to fulfil the criteria within a reasonable time-period (was thinking one week, two max). I'm going to place this article on hold. I'll check back in a week. If you want any more feedback/clarification then just ping me on my talk page and I'll try and answer reasonably promptly. - Shudde talk 11:25, 18 March 2013 (UTC)
Additional comments Something I forgot to add when I did my initial review. This influences the broadness of the article. I know that the teams would create their schedules dynamically as the season went on, but there is not information regarding Douglas Park (Rock Island) — for example it was obviously shared with other sports teams. Even more importantly, why did they play all but one of their matches at "Home"? Did other teams use this as their home ground as well, or was this simply a quirky result of the dynamic scheduling? - Shudde talk 02:03, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
There are basically two things which still need to be done for this article to pass. One is that the lead needs to be cleaned up—the language doesn't read particularly well, and could also do with a bit of an expansion. The second is the match in January 1921 which has not been included; considering the short length of the season, I think omitting this means that the article doesn't meet the "broad" criteria. Considering it's relative insignificance, I don't think much needs to be said about it. The article has been on hold for a while, so I'll give it another 3-4 days for these things to be fixed. Otherwise I'll fail it, and it can be renominated once those two things are addressed. - Shudde talk 04:19, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
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