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Reviewer: Mackensen ( talk · contribs) 15:46, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
Hello
ChrisGualtieri, thanks for your work on this article. I'll take this review on. Please excuse any missteps as this is my first crack at reviewing.
Mackensen
(talk) 15:46, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | ||
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | The image is available under a free license, and is the only image which makes sense for the article. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. |
Mackensen, ChrisGualtieri, it has been over a month since the last post here (I don't see any edits to address it), and longer than that since the article was edited. I think it's getting to be about time to conclude the review, if no further work is contemplated. Thanks. BlueMoonset ( talk) 21:38, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
My only criticism of this article is that it doesn't connect to the larger picture. It is apparently part of a greater system of milestones. Parenthetically, I would note that while the Postmaster General position had not come into being until 1775, his service as postmaster had gone on for decades before. 1761 Milestone by Franklin elsewhere 7&6=thirteen ( ☎) 17:33, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
1761 Milestone has been listed as one of the
Engineering and technology good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: October 31, 2014. ( Reviewed version). |
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content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Mackensen ( talk · contribs) 15:46, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
Hello
ChrisGualtieri, thanks for your work on this article. I'll take this review on. Please excuse any missteps as this is my first crack at reviewing.
Mackensen
(talk) 15:46, 17 August 2014 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | ||
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
| |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | The image is available under a free license, and is the only image which makes sense for the article. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. |
Mackensen, ChrisGualtieri, it has been over a month since the last post here (I don't see any edits to address it), and longer than that since the article was edited. I think it's getting to be about time to conclude the review, if no further work is contemplated. Thanks. BlueMoonset ( talk) 21:38, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
My only criticism of this article is that it doesn't connect to the larger picture. It is apparently part of a greater system of milestones. Parenthetically, I would note that while the Postmaster General position had not come into being until 1775, his service as postmaster had gone on for decades before. 1761 Milestone by Franklin elsewhere 7&6=thirteen ( ☎) 17:33, 17 August 2014 (UTC)