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please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
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The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk)
10:52, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by Dumelow ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:29, 7 January 2022 (UTC).
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
Very interesting new article, hook source on JSTOR verified thanks to
WP:LIBRARY. The text there doesn't use a comma ("You are all right men You are all right they are all passing over your heads") but
MOS:PMC seems apt for readability here; no meaning of the quote is changed (hey, I've got to point something out haven't I!?). I had to look up if we have an article for
adjutant, and noticed this isn't linked in either the hook or the article. I think we certainly need a link in the article, but I think one in the hook is at the nominator's discretion. The hook is currently 195 chars; if we need to trim the hook I think we could lose "sat next to him" and, if necessary, reword to "[the bullets]".
MIDI (
talk)
20:35, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Modified ALT0 to T:DYK/P5
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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 08:45, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
I'll take this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed ( talk) 08:45, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
Firstly, it is good to see an article from one of Queen Victoria's "Little Wars" here at GA. I picked up on a few things, but a lot of it is simply about links and slight clarity/contextual tweaks for ease of reading, as otherwise it is in pretty good order. My comments:
That's it for me, placing the review on hold for now. Zawed ( talk) 03:25, 27 November 2022 (UTC)
![]() | Zungeni Mountain skirmish has been listed as one of the
Warfare good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: November 29, 2022. ( Reviewed version). |
![]() | A fact from Zungeni Mountain skirmish appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 24 January 2022 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
| ![]() |
![]() | This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||||||
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The result was: promoted by
Theleekycauldron (
talk)
10:52, 19 January 2022 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by Dumelow ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:29, 7 January 2022 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px. |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall:
Very interesting new article, hook source on JSTOR verified thanks to
WP:LIBRARY. The text there doesn't use a comma ("You are all right men You are all right they are all passing over your heads") but
MOS:PMC seems apt for readability here; no meaning of the quote is changed (hey, I've got to point something out haven't I!?). I had to look up if we have an article for
adjutant, and noticed this isn't linked in either the hook or the article. I think we certainly need a link in the article, but I think one in the hook is at the nominator's discretion. The hook is currently 195 chars; if we need to trim the hook I think we could lose "sat next to him" and, if necessary, reword to "[the bullets]".
MIDI (
talk)
20:35, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
Modified ALT0 to T:DYK/P5
GA toolbox |
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 08:45, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
I'll take this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed ( talk) 08:45, 23 November 2022 (UTC)
Firstly, it is good to see an article from one of Queen Victoria's "Little Wars" here at GA. I picked up on a few things, but a lot of it is simply about links and slight clarity/contextual tweaks for ease of reading, as otherwise it is in pretty good order. My comments:
That's it for me, placing the review on hold for now. Zawed ( talk) 03:25, 27 November 2022 (UTC)