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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 12:43, 3 January 2015 (UTC)
I'll take this one, should have this in a day or two and will mainly focus on copyediting issues. Thanks ☯
Jag
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12:43, 3 January 2015 (UTC)
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I like the way this article is written, so not many problems regarding the prose. I noted a few things that could be improved/clarified, so I'll put this on hold for the standard seven days. This does look like GA material, and as with 90% of my reviews I put it on hold to ensure that not only everything is addressed, but perfected in the article. ☯ Jag uar ☯ 14:14, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for tending to this review,
Gabriel Yuji, and I'm grateful this has happened because it is a well written article as it as and would have hated to fail it due to inactivity. Well done, not much work to put in but now it meets the GA criteria ☯
Jag
uar ☯
16:36, 9 January 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 12:43, 3 January 2015 (UTC)
I'll take this one, should have this in a day or two and will mainly focus on copyediting issues. Thanks ☯
Jag
uar ☯
12:43, 3 January 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
I like the way this article is written, so not many problems regarding the prose. I noted a few things that could be improved/clarified, so I'll put this on hold for the standard seven days. This does look like GA material, and as with 90% of my reviews I put it on hold to ensure that not only everything is addressed, but perfected in the article. ☯ Jag uar ☯ 14:14, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for tending to this review,
Gabriel Yuji, and I'm grateful this has happened because it is a well written article as it as and would have hated to fail it due to inactivity. Well done, not much work to put in but now it meets the GA criteria ☯
Jag
uar ☯
16:36, 9 January 2015 (UTC)