Doesn't he still owe the record for biggest contract signed by a right-handed pitcher. The few contracts that surpassed it (Lee, Kershaw) are all left-handers. Mention it if it's still the case instead of "at the time". If it was surpassed, mention which pitcher surpassed it.
Ancestery.com isn't a reliable source, replace it.
Citation 1 needs to be better organized with the other refs.
"...education for the Greinke kids." There is no other mention of siblings in the early life section, only one sibling in personal life. Better to remove it unless you want to expand on siblings.
"estimated that he hit close to .700 in the tournament to lead his team." - "lead of team" is repetitive here, mentioned twice already in the same sentence, reword or remove.
The third and fourth paragraphs of early life can be combined.
If the review's not done in another couple days ping me. He keeps saying he's gonna do it and it's still barely progressing, so I'll just do it.
Wizardman19:42, 10 May 2014 (UTC)reply
Doesn't he still owe the record for biggest contract signed by a right-handed pitcher. The few contracts that surpassed it (Lee, Kershaw) are all left-handers. Mention it if it's still the case instead of "at the time". If it was surpassed, mention which pitcher surpassed it.
Ancestery.com isn't a reliable source, replace it.
Citation 1 needs to be better organized with the other refs.
"...education for the Greinke kids." There is no other mention of siblings in the early life section, only one sibling in personal life. Better to remove it unless you want to expand on siblings.
"estimated that he hit close to .700 in the tournament to lead his team." - "lead of team" is repetitive here, mentioned twice already in the same sentence, reword or remove.
The third and fourth paragraphs of early life can be combined.
If the review's not done in another couple days ping me. He keeps saying he's gonna do it and it's still barely progressing, so I'll just do it.
Wizardman19:42, 10 May 2014 (UTC)reply