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Reviewer: I'll be started the review soon. Headbomb ( talk · contribs) 13:12, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
Quick notes on reference: Hazeltine & Meiss (2013), and Seifer (2009) are missing page numbers. Bellan (2000) is missing/has wrong bibliographic information. Seifer (2009) is missing ISBN.
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The references are in good shape, as far as I can tell. The prose needs some minor proof-reading and copy-editing. With a quick skim, I found a hyphen instead of a dash, "hanger" instead of "hangar", "Amps" instead of "amps", inconsistent use of the serial comma, a mis-formatted ellipsis. I recommend putting it on the list at WP:GOCER. – Jonesey95 ( talk) 02:49, 20 March 2017 (UTC)
Note for mods: Please close this GA, I'm moving it to FA. Maury Markowitz ( talk) 10:53, 11 July 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: I'll be started the review soon. Headbomb ( talk · contribs) 13:12, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
Quick notes on reference: Hazeltine & Meiss (2013), and Seifer (2009) are missing page numbers. Bellan (2000) is missing/has wrong bibliographic information. Seifer (2009) is missing ISBN.
Headbomb {
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14:06, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
The references are in good shape, as far as I can tell. The prose needs some minor proof-reading and copy-editing. With a quick skim, I found a hyphen instead of a dash, "hanger" instead of "hangar", "Amps" instead of "amps", inconsistent use of the serial comma, a mis-formatted ellipsis. I recommend putting it on the list at WP:GOCER. – Jonesey95 ( talk) 02:49, 20 March 2017 (UTC)
Note for mods: Please close this GA, I'm moving it to FA. Maury Markowitz ( talk) 10:53, 11 July 2017 (UTC)