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Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 ( talk · contribs) 08:10, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
Can you simplify? Because that way it's a little weird to read.
This is not very clear. He intentionally created him undeveloped, then? Or did he create him by doing JJK first and then he couldn't develop him?
The repetition of the subject is a bit odd.
This seems to contradict what was said earlier.
That's all for the lead.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 12:08, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
@ TeenAngels1234: Done. Reorganized a bit these sections to generate to avoid repeating names and make it easier to follow. Tintor2 ( talk) 20:42, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: That's all for now. I'm still currently extremely busy with university, so I'm kinda slow. Sorry.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 18:46, 15 April 2022 (UTC) @ TeenAngels1234: No problem. Tintor2 ( talk) 18:58, 15 April 2022 (UTC) @ Tintor2: Okay. The article sounds fine to me.
@ TeenAngels1234: Okay. Everything's fine now. Passing. TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 16:18, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
Hey @ Tintor2, could we get a quote on the "Sugawara no Michizane was included as a tribute to an editor"? I read parts of the book it's attributed to, but I don't remember anything like that being stated Horsesizedduck ( talk) 16:34, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
@ Horsesizedduck: I have it but in Spanish. In the fanbook page 180, Akutami says that he added Sugawara as a present to the late Yamanaka based on an advice about adding a historical figure to the manga. Tintor2 ( talk) 17:22, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 ( talk · contribs) 08:10, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
Can you simplify? Because that way it's a little weird to read.
This is not very clear. He intentionally created him undeveloped, then? Or did he create him by doing JJK first and then he couldn't develop him?
The repetition of the subject is a bit odd.
This seems to contradict what was said earlier.
That's all for the lead.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 12:08, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
@ TeenAngels1234: Done. Reorganized a bit these sections to generate to avoid repeating names and make it easier to follow. Tintor2 ( talk) 20:42, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: That's all for now. I'm still currently extremely busy with university, so I'm kinda slow. Sorry.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 18:46, 15 April 2022 (UTC) @ TeenAngels1234: No problem. Tintor2 ( talk) 18:58, 15 April 2022 (UTC) @ Tintor2: Okay. The article sounds fine to me.
@ TeenAngels1234: Okay. Everything's fine now. Passing. TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 16:18, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
Hey @ Tintor2, could we get a quote on the "Sugawara no Michizane was included as a tribute to an editor"? I read parts of the book it's attributed to, but I don't remember anything like that being stated Horsesizedduck ( talk) 16:34, 14 January 2023 (UTC)
@ Horsesizedduck: I have it but in Spanish. In the fanbook page 180, Akutami says that he added Sugawara as a present to the late Yamanaka based on an advice about adding a historical figure to the manga. Tintor2 ( talk) 17:22, 14 January 2023 (UTC)