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In the pianist's website e.g. Warner Bros, as well as other music webisites/chart e.g. Billboard, when searching Yundi Li, there may not have result, while searching 'Yundi' gives result.
More important, the pianist is self-identified as Yundi. The 'Li' is more like a birth name, given at birth. EleniXDD ( talk) 04:47, 12 February 2024 (UTC)
The sentence, " He is a Chinese pianist who rose to fame when in 2000" is grammatically incorrect. EleniXDD ( talk) 05:11, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: EleniXDD ( talk · contribs) 15:13, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Aza24 ( talk · contribs) 16:55, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
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Hi there Eleni, this article has quite a few issues, but rather than failing the GA, I'm willing to work with you to get it where it needs to be. Since you're a rather new editor—welcome by the way!—I thought it would be best to establish some standards for the GA, before we move into more specific things such as prose & coverage:
Hi Aza24, thanks for the help. I have fixed interwiki linkings, infobox and image position problems. I will work on the brief summary for discography section. For the lead section, I have moved some of the citations away, the remaining citations can be moved after adding in the music style/pianism section you've suggested. -- EleniXDD※ Talk 06:23, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
I see four major areas for coverage improvement:
Hi Aza24, thanks for your hard-work on reviewing and giving construction suggestions. I have just addressed his disappearance -- in fact, as quoted by sources, his career was still progressing, and he’s still seen in public after his memory lapse in 2015, e.g. he had world tours after 2015 and had his debut in Australia and New Zealand in 2018. He disappeared during 2021 to 2022 was because of the alleged solicitation of prostitutes, and he was blacklisted in China. I have added the reason behind in the come-back tour part, "two years after he was blacklisted in China for alleged solicitation of prostitutes", see if this is sufficient for explaining the disappearance.
I didn't mention his first ended contract with DG, according to statement by Columbia Artists Management in 2004, the contract was supposed to originally end in October 2004, but extended till October 2009 to include CD recordings and DVD releases. And his album Noctures (released by EMI) was recorded in Nov 2009, shows that his contract ended and switched to EMI. Not sure sure whether switching contract is necessary to be included.
I will fix, expand and add other sections mentioned above. Once again, thank you so much for your help and advice. -- EleniXDD※ Talk 07:22, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
I have incoporated the two broad sources you've provided (thanks for finding them). I will continue to work on the style.-- EleniXDD※ Talk 05:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
As suggested in the talk page (GA Review section) earlier, the subject this article featured is more notable (mostly known) as Yundi Li, especially in English-based sources. (thanks to @ Aza24 for providing this n-gram viewer) Furthermore, the artist himself chose to go-by his first name (Yundi) since 2010, as shown here. EleniXDD※ Talk 14:55, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
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In the pianist's website e.g. Warner Bros, as well as other music webisites/chart e.g. Billboard, when searching Yundi Li, there may not have result, while searching 'Yundi' gives result.
More important, the pianist is self-identified as Yundi. The 'Li' is more like a birth name, given at birth. EleniXDD ( talk) 04:47, 12 February 2024 (UTC)
The sentence, " He is a Chinese pianist who rose to fame when in 2000" is grammatically incorrect. EleniXDD ( talk) 05:11, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: EleniXDD ( talk · contribs) 15:13, 5 February 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Aza24 ( talk · contribs) 16:55, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
Happy to review this! Best -
Aza24
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16:55, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
Hi there Eleni, this article has quite a few issues, but rather than failing the GA, I'm willing to work with you to get it where it needs to be. Since you're a rather new editor—welcome by the way!—I thought it would be best to establish some standards for the GA, before we move into more specific things such as prose & coverage:
Hi Aza24, thanks for the help. I have fixed interwiki linkings, infobox and image position problems. I will work on the brief summary for discography section. For the lead section, I have moved some of the citations away, the remaining citations can be moved after adding in the music style/pianism section you've suggested. -- EleniXDD※ Talk 06:23, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
I see four major areas for coverage improvement:
Hi Aza24, thanks for your hard-work on reviewing and giving construction suggestions. I have just addressed his disappearance -- in fact, as quoted by sources, his career was still progressing, and he’s still seen in public after his memory lapse in 2015, e.g. he had world tours after 2015 and had his debut in Australia and New Zealand in 2018. He disappeared during 2021 to 2022 was because of the alleged solicitation of prostitutes, and he was blacklisted in China. I have added the reason behind in the come-back tour part, "two years after he was blacklisted in China for alleged solicitation of prostitutes", see if this is sufficient for explaining the disappearance.
I didn't mention his first ended contract with DG, according to statement by Columbia Artists Management in 2004, the contract was supposed to originally end in October 2004, but extended till October 2009 to include CD recordings and DVD releases. And his album Noctures (released by EMI) was recorded in Nov 2009, shows that his contract ended and switched to EMI. Not sure sure whether switching contract is necessary to be included.
I will fix, expand and add other sections mentioned above. Once again, thank you so much for your help and advice. -- EleniXDD※ Talk 07:22, 23 March 2024 (UTC)
I have incoporated the two broad sources you've provided (thanks for finding them). I will continue to work on the style.-- EleniXDD※ Talk 05:23, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
As suggested in the talk page (GA Review section) earlier, the subject this article featured is more notable (mostly known) as Yundi Li, especially in English-based sources. (thanks to @ Aza24 for providing this n-gram viewer) Furthermore, the artist himself chose to go-by his first name (Yundi) since 2010, as shown here. EleniXDD※ Talk 14:55, 4 April 2024 (UTC)