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Reviewer: Tintor2 ( talk · contribs) 19:54, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article. It'll take some time I will always use a ping to tell the nominator. Happy editing. Tintor2 ( talk) 19:54, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Link20XX:
That's all for me so far. Good work with the article. Try covering these issues and I'll pass it. Maybe you could use Tokyo Babylon or Rurouni Kenshin: Restoration (none of these are GA though) as models of short mangas to gain more experience when writing these types of article. Tintor2 ( talk) 20:38, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: Hello. See my responses above. Link20XX ( talk) 23:14, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Link20XX: Two last things. Can you put a premise about the light novel alongside its English release date? Lastly, remove citations from the lead. The body is meant to reference material from the lead that is supposed have already been covered. Also, if possible does the author talk about the series' creation in those afterwards from the volumes? They are rarely used but it helps if it's available. Tintor2 ( talk) 23:29, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: I added a plot summary for the light novel and removed the references in the lead. As for the inspiration, at least in the volumes I own the author didn't provide much of an inspiration for the series' creation. The only thing I could find was this ANN interview, but I'm not sure if its enough to write a creation section. Link20XX ( talk) 23:57, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Tintor2 ( talk · contribs) 19:54, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing this article. It'll take some time I will always use a ping to tell the nominator. Happy editing. Tintor2 ( talk) 19:54, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Link20XX:
That's all for me so far. Good work with the article. Try covering these issues and I'll pass it. Maybe you could use Tokyo Babylon or Rurouni Kenshin: Restoration (none of these are GA though) as models of short mangas to gain more experience when writing these types of article. Tintor2 ( talk) 20:38, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: Hello. See my responses above. Link20XX ( talk) 23:14, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Link20XX: Two last things. Can you put a premise about the light novel alongside its English release date? Lastly, remove citations from the lead. The body is meant to reference material from the lead that is supposed have already been covered. Also, if possible does the author talk about the series' creation in those afterwards from the volumes? They are rarely used but it helps if it's available. Tintor2 ( talk) 23:29, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: I added a plot summary for the light novel and removed the references in the lead. As for the inspiration, at least in the volumes I own the author didn't provide much of an inspiration for the series' creation. The only thing I could find was this ANN interview, but I'm not sure if its enough to write a creation section. Link20XX ( talk) 23:57, 2 February 2021 (UTC)