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It was written and produced by Pete Ibsen and Richard Rawson, with additional writing from Ali Tennant. → It was written by Pete Ibsen, Richard Rawson and Ali Tennant, the production was handled by the former two.
A dance-pop song, it is → The dance-pop song is
Although "Young" was slated for release on 6 May 2012, it was instead released on 27 April for digital download and streaming in Ireland and the United Kingdom. It was issued by All Around the World and Island Records.
Yes. Should be "Young" was initially slated for release on 6 May 2012. However, it was only issued on 27 April in Ireland and the United Kingdom by All Around the World and Island Records for digital download and streaming."
MarioSoulTruthFan (
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10:50, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
The music video for the song was released shortly...→ add date
by the public → weren't the reviewers? or was everyone?
Ali Tennant wrote the lyrics with Fazer and Pete Ibsen, who also produced the song → Pete Ibsen, Richard Rawson and Ali Tennant wrote the track, the former two also produced it.
Tulisa recorded the track in 2011 → not on the given source
A dance-pop track, it "deals with mistakes made during youth" → composition section, see below
The album version of the track lasts for four minutes and 12 seconds,[3] while the radio edit lasts for three minutes and 35 seconds.[12][13] → The album version of the track lasts for four minutes and 12 seconds, while the radio edit lasts for three minutes and 35 seconds.[3][12]
Done
Reception
Fine
Promotion and controversy
Wasn't the music video shot in February according to source 4?
"Young" is a a dance-pop track, which "deals with mistakes made during youth". Its composition includes a "mix of pulsing beats helmed by her former beau and bandmate, before a chorus of glorious strobing trance ensues"... for example. You have too look at the sources, because there is more. So anything describing the song, lyrics meaning
MarioSoulTruthFan (
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10:54, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Before I add it, should it only contain stuff about the composition? Asking since you suggested something similar at Mad at Disney's review.
Sebbirrrr (
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13:17, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
So it was indeed released as a single. It is a day earlier than the source you have. There is no indication if it was radio, download, streaming or any other, neither does it mention the label. Can always claim the format and label are unknown.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
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11:05, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
It doesn't say it was released on 30 April, just that it was released during that week. It could refer to 29 April, when it was released for digital download and streaming but we don't know.
Sebbirrrr (
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13:17, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
I was saying that she found Flavour in regards to your concern about the author changing, not that that makes the article reliable. Unfortunately I couldn't find any articles which she wrote for these publications so I will remove the source. Before I remove it I wanted to let you know that this was the only other source I could find which gives info about the music video's director and Chip's cameo appearance
https://www.promonews.tv/videos/2012/04/03/tulisa-young-ben-peters/12578 could you take a look at it and see if it is reliable? If it's not, I will remove this bit entirely since it's not that important.
Sebbirrrr (
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13:17, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
I will wait until you address everything. Please let me know once its done. Any other doubts please post them behind this point, it is getting confusing elsewhere.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
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13:28, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
@
MarioSoulTruthFan: Added the composition section, the promonews.tv source and removed Flavour entirely. The only thing which I haven't done is the release date. Since the article says that it was released during that week in April, should I instead say that the song was released in the United Kingdom in April 2012?
Sebbirrrr (
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19:15, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
I changed something, see if you agree with it. I'm unsure if I should change when she recorded the track there as well? Good job on the sources, regarding the release date. The date you already have is a specific one. That source only confirms "Young" as a single. I guess you can add it after "by All Around the World and Island Records for digital download and streaming". Its proof it was single
MarioSoulTruthFan (
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19:26, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
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It was written and produced by Pete Ibsen and Richard Rawson, with additional writing from Ali Tennant. → It was written by Pete Ibsen, Richard Rawson and Ali Tennant, the production was handled by the former two.
A dance-pop song, it is → The dance-pop song is
Although "Young" was slated for release on 6 May 2012, it was instead released on 27 April for digital download and streaming in Ireland and the United Kingdom. It was issued by All Around the World and Island Records.
Yes. Should be "Young" was initially slated for release on 6 May 2012. However, it was only issued on 27 April in Ireland and the United Kingdom by All Around the World and Island Records for digital download and streaming."
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk)
10:50, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
The music video for the song was released shortly...→ add date
by the public → weren't the reviewers? or was everyone?
Ali Tennant wrote the lyrics with Fazer and Pete Ibsen, who also produced the song → Pete Ibsen, Richard Rawson and Ali Tennant wrote the track, the former two also produced it.
Tulisa recorded the track in 2011 → not on the given source
A dance-pop track, it "deals with mistakes made during youth" → composition section, see below
The album version of the track lasts for four minutes and 12 seconds,[3] while the radio edit lasts for three minutes and 35 seconds.[12][13] → The album version of the track lasts for four minutes and 12 seconds, while the radio edit lasts for three minutes and 35 seconds.[3][12]
Done
Reception
Fine
Promotion and controversy
Wasn't the music video shot in February according to source 4?
"Young" is a a dance-pop track, which "deals with mistakes made during youth". Its composition includes a "mix of pulsing beats helmed by her former beau and bandmate, before a chorus of glorious strobing trance ensues"... for example. You have too look at the sources, because there is more. So anything describing the song, lyrics meaning
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk)
10:54, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Before I add it, should it only contain stuff about the composition? Asking since you suggested something similar at Mad at Disney's review.
Sebbirrrr (
talk)
13:17, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
So it was indeed released as a single. It is a day earlier than the source you have. There is no indication if it was radio, download, streaming or any other, neither does it mention the label. Can always claim the format and label are unknown.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk)
11:05, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
It doesn't say it was released on 30 April, just that it was released during that week. It could refer to 29 April, when it was released for digital download and streaming but we don't know.
Sebbirrrr (
talk)
13:17, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
I was saying that she found Flavour in regards to your concern about the author changing, not that that makes the article reliable. Unfortunately I couldn't find any articles which she wrote for these publications so I will remove the source. Before I remove it I wanted to let you know that this was the only other source I could find which gives info about the music video's director and Chip's cameo appearance
https://www.promonews.tv/videos/2012/04/03/tulisa-young-ben-peters/12578 could you take a look at it and see if it is reliable? If it's not, I will remove this bit entirely since it's not that important.
Sebbirrrr (
talk)
13:17, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
I will wait until you address everything. Please let me know once its done. Any other doubts please post them behind this point, it is getting confusing elsewhere.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk)
13:28, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
@
MarioSoulTruthFan: Added the composition section, the promonews.tv source and removed Flavour entirely. The only thing which I haven't done is the release date. Since the article says that it was released during that week in April, should I instead say that the song was released in the United Kingdom in April 2012?
Sebbirrrr (
talk)
19:15, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply
I changed something, see if you agree with it. I'm unsure if I should change when she recorded the track there as well? Good job on the sources, regarding the release date. The date you already have is a specific one. That source only confirms "Young" as a single. I guess you can add it after "by All Around the World and Island Records for digital download and streaming". Its proof it was single
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk)
19:26, 28 June 2022 (UTC)reply