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Reviewer: Adog ( talk · contribs) 05:21, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
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I will take on this review. As part of my song reviews, I will add an informal song review of the song that has no bearing on the review itself. I will fully review this by either Monday, August 21 or Tuesday, August 22. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 05:21, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
Writing for Wikipedia, a dog stated "Marc Anthony's name reminded him of Mark Antony, which hopefully did not bring the wrong aura as Antony was pretty bad at trying to do anything. However, Anthony delivered this classic-sounding song from the 2000s". The dog continued, stating, "Anthony's stylish music video, set in New York City, brings back sweet memories for [the writer's] life traveling" and adding "it was a nice romantic ballad attuned to contemporary listener". The dog finished his review by summarizing that Anthony's work "goes beyond the era it lays in, and still touches our hearts nearly a quarter millennia away". Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 06:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
Alright, as for the actual review itself. The following are going to be my suggestions for the editor-at-large during my skim and full read-through on grammar or sentence structure fixes. If you feel the suggestions are inappropriate, not proper, or do not fit the context, feel free to disregard with a comment:
"You Sang to Me" is a song that was recorded by American singer Marc Anthony for his self-titled fourth studio album (1999).I would omit "that was" as extra words.
... and adult contemporary genres whose lyrics are about a man who lets his life partner walk away, although he is in a relationship with another person.I would separate the sentence into two starting with "Although" as a new sentence or semi-colon here to link the two.
Music critics gave "You Sang to Me" a positive reception upon its release, praising Anthony's vocals and the song's arrangements.
"Muy Dentro de Mí" topped the US Billboard Hot Latin Songs and Tropical Airplay charts.
Anthony included the song on the set lists of his 1999 promotional tour, his Marc Anthony 2002 Tour, and his and Jennifer Lopez's El Cantante Tour (2007-08).might read better by omitting "his" before "Marc Anthony 2002" and "and his" before "and Jennifer".
... Anthony's next album. Anthony, along with his associates, co-wrote most of the tracks on the album
One of the songs Anthony wrote with Rooney is "You Sang to Me", which according to the artist ...I would add a comma after "artist".
Anthony's vocals are accompanied ...or
Anthony's vocal performance is accompanied ....
In the song, Anthony chants; ...The semi-colon here should be a comma.
At the end, Anthony is alone at an art exhibition when Hinze appears behind him and they rekindle their loveTwo things here. "In the end" instead of "At the end" and comma before "and".
... which went to "She Walks This Earth" by StingI would add the word "ultimately" between "which" and "went" for better emphasis.
... to give Anthony his highest position on the Hot 100"giving" instead of "to give"?
The first skim and read-through was good. I will fully review the rest of the article tomorrow. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 06:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
Columbia Records released "You Sang to Me" as the second single from Marc Anthony in February 2000I can verify the former half, but "in February 2000" I cannot, or my Spanish needs some brushing up on. Source to add to match?
In Canada, "You Sang to Me" peaked at number 11 and topped the adult contemporary chart according to RPM.[61][62]. I cannot access ref. 61 either.
First round of spot checks are iffy. Doing a second run below. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 23:45, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
"'You Sang to Me' and 'That's Okay' show off his range the best".because this sentence is exactly how it is structured in the source cited. Otherwise, it could be the other way if the titles were flipped.
I am going to take a break from the spot checks and return in a bit. These spot checks are crossing over into WP:OR and iffy-territory in terms of close paraphrasing. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 23:45, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
The article has some issues worth addressing above in terms of prose, content, and context. The article does follow the general manual of style. In terms of sources, most are reliable that I checked, and the article uses a variety of sources to help support the prose. I do have some questions on some sources above. The reference layout is mostly good, with some minor tweaks needed. The spot checks were probably the thing that needs addressing most, as there are some things here and there that need to be rewritten, omitted, or have a source to back up the claim. In terms of Earwig, it appears ok, I would ask the editor to double-check as I did see some cases of close paraphrasing that would not work if this article were to pass. Do double-check the source's presentation of its content and if all parts of the sentence are in a source. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 02:56, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
The article has enough broadness and focus to it, and it should be passable. Although I will note, it could do with a little more expansion to some sections, such as the "Background" to identify better who Marc Anthony is and how this song came to be. The article is neutral towards its subject. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 02:56, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
The one image that is in the article is relevant to the content, with its paperwork properly filed. The article is stable, with no active or ongoing edit conflicts. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 06:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
I think I got all of it. Let me know if I missed any. Erick ( talk) 17:35, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Adog ( talk · contribs) 05:21, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
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I will take on this review. As part of my song reviews, I will add an informal song review of the song that has no bearing on the review itself. I will fully review this by either Monday, August 21 or Tuesday, August 22. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 05:21, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
Writing for Wikipedia, a dog stated "Marc Anthony's name reminded him of Mark Antony, which hopefully did not bring the wrong aura as Antony was pretty bad at trying to do anything. However, Anthony delivered this classic-sounding song from the 2000s". The dog continued, stating, "Anthony's stylish music video, set in New York City, brings back sweet memories for [the writer's] life traveling" and adding "it was a nice romantic ballad attuned to contemporary listener". The dog finished his review by summarizing that Anthony's work "goes beyond the era it lays in, and still touches our hearts nearly a quarter millennia away". Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 06:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
Alright, as for the actual review itself. The following are going to be my suggestions for the editor-at-large during my skim and full read-through on grammar or sentence structure fixes. If you feel the suggestions are inappropriate, not proper, or do not fit the context, feel free to disregard with a comment:
"You Sang to Me" is a song that was recorded by American singer Marc Anthony for his self-titled fourth studio album (1999).I would omit "that was" as extra words.
... and adult contemporary genres whose lyrics are about a man who lets his life partner walk away, although he is in a relationship with another person.I would separate the sentence into two starting with "Although" as a new sentence or semi-colon here to link the two.
Music critics gave "You Sang to Me" a positive reception upon its release, praising Anthony's vocals and the song's arrangements.
"Muy Dentro de Mí" topped the US Billboard Hot Latin Songs and Tropical Airplay charts.
Anthony included the song on the set lists of his 1999 promotional tour, his Marc Anthony 2002 Tour, and his and Jennifer Lopez's El Cantante Tour (2007-08).might read better by omitting "his" before "Marc Anthony 2002" and "and his" before "and Jennifer".
... Anthony's next album. Anthony, along with his associates, co-wrote most of the tracks on the album
One of the songs Anthony wrote with Rooney is "You Sang to Me", which according to the artist ...I would add a comma after "artist".
Anthony's vocals are accompanied ...or
Anthony's vocal performance is accompanied ....
In the song, Anthony chants; ...The semi-colon here should be a comma.
At the end, Anthony is alone at an art exhibition when Hinze appears behind him and they rekindle their loveTwo things here. "In the end" instead of "At the end" and comma before "and".
... which went to "She Walks This Earth" by StingI would add the word "ultimately" between "which" and "went" for better emphasis.
... to give Anthony his highest position on the Hot 100"giving" instead of "to give"?
The first skim and read-through was good. I will fully review the rest of the article tomorrow. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 06:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
Columbia Records released "You Sang to Me" as the second single from Marc Anthony in February 2000I can verify the former half, but "in February 2000" I cannot, or my Spanish needs some brushing up on. Source to add to match?
In Canada, "You Sang to Me" peaked at number 11 and topped the adult contemporary chart according to RPM.[61][62]. I cannot access ref. 61 either.
First round of spot checks are iffy. Doing a second run below. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 23:45, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
"'You Sang to Me' and 'That's Okay' show off his range the best".because this sentence is exactly how it is structured in the source cited. Otherwise, it could be the other way if the titles were flipped.
I am going to take a break from the spot checks and return in a bit. These spot checks are crossing over into WP:OR and iffy-territory in terms of close paraphrasing. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 23:45, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
The article has some issues worth addressing above in terms of prose, content, and context. The article does follow the general manual of style. In terms of sources, most are reliable that I checked, and the article uses a variety of sources to help support the prose. I do have some questions on some sources above. The reference layout is mostly good, with some minor tweaks needed. The spot checks were probably the thing that needs addressing most, as there are some things here and there that need to be rewritten, omitted, or have a source to back up the claim. In terms of Earwig, it appears ok, I would ask the editor to double-check as I did see some cases of close paraphrasing that would not work if this article were to pass. Do double-check the source's presentation of its content and if all parts of the sentence are in a source. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 02:56, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
The article has enough broadness and focus to it, and it should be passable. Although I will note, it could do with a little more expansion to some sections, such as the "Background" to identify better who Marc Anthony is and how this song came to be. The article is neutral towards its subject. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 02:56, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
The one image that is in the article is relevant to the content, with its paperwork properly filed. The article is stable, with no active or ongoing edit conflicts. Adog ( Talk・ Cont) 06:18, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
I think I got all of it. Let me know if I missed any. Erick ( talk) 17:35, 3 September 2023 (UTC)