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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott ( talk · contribs) 01:10, 10 September 2013 (UTC) reply

I've got this one. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 01:10, 10 September 2013 (UTC) reply

OK, here I go...

• The plot section is overly long. Read WP:TVPLOT - it should be between 200 to 500 characters.
  • Plot section is now 494 words. 和DITOR E tails 14:52, 15 September 2013 (UTC) reply
• Nothing about the production of the episode?
  • Has been added 和DITOR E tails 14:51, 15 September 2013 (UTC) reply
• This cultural reference are unsourced: "The sad clown painting in Kip's room is likely a reference to the original "The Sims" PC game, in which if a similar painting is present and a sim is depressed, a clown will appear and attempt to cheer them up (though will fail miserably and depress them further)."
  • Removed 和DITOR E tails 14:52, 15 September 2013 (UTC) reply
• The home release section is small and should be merged with another section, like "reception".
  • Merge into release section 和DITOR E tails 14:52, 15 September 2013 (UTC) reply

I'll put the article on hold so the concerns may be addressed. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 21:55, 14 September 2013 (UTC) reply

Passed. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 15:08, 21 September 2013 (UTC) reply