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07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
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I will get on with this right away! --
K. Peake
07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
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Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
"It was written by the latters" → "It was written by the performers"
Mention the teaser and it being their first collaboration before the release sentence
"It received critical acclaim from" → "The song received critical acclaim from"
Only mention countries it reached "the top 50" in the first sentence since below that is not notable
"in the US and" → "in the United States and" per
MOS:US , as this is the first mention of the country
"The official
music video was" → "The accompanying
music video was"
Remove the word official from YouTube channel because that is obvious for the lead
"and the United States." → "and the US."
Background and composition
"with Regard uploading a" → "with Regard also uploading a"
Regard's elaboration statements seems like it should be the "Collaborating with..." one, as that is the only quote of this in the source
[11] should solely be invoked at the end of the sentence
"Sivan and Mc Rare sing about" → "Sivan and McRae sing about"
"During the lyrics, they sing," → "On the chorus, they sing,"
Reception
Only write music critics, omitting the writers part
"to him, create an" → "to him, creates an"
Remove or replace PopClub per
WP:SELFPUB
"vocals from them" → "vocals from the singers"
"likening the "sultry and" → "appreciating the "sultry and"
"an "infatuation and summer" anthem, that" → "an "infatuation" and summer anthem that"
"opined that "['You'] is a great" → "opined that "['You'] is [a] great"
"should be […] with each artist" → "should be [with] each artist"
Only identify the United States chart as Billboard Hot 100
"It also peaked atop" → "The song also peaked atop"
"more than 500,000 units." → "more than 500,000 certified units in the US." per MOS:US
"the Netherlands,[28] Singapore,[29] as well as" → "the Netherlands[28] and Singapore,[29] as well as"
Promotion
Wikilink
lyric video to itself per
MOS:LINK2SECT
Pipe acoustic to
Acoustic music
I don't think "on 14 June" is needed when you mentioned the date a sentence before the later part
"and controlling the video." → "and taking control."
"who's face is covered" → "whose face is covered"
"Tate was in Los Angeles," → "Tate was in LA," per the source wording
"a really cool idea"." → "a really cool idea."" per
MOS:QUOTE
The black setting and LED wall parts are unsourced
"of
MTV's Video Music Awards " → "of the
MTV Video Music Awards "
Track listing
Credits and personnel
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Charts
Weekly charts
Year-end charts
Certifications
Release history
See also
References
Final comments and verdict
Iaof2017 The only problem I have now is that you have not changed Regard's elaboration quote in background to the one the source mentions, "Collaborating with Troye and Regard was an amazing experience. It's a totally different vibe than any of my usual songs, but still has the emotional and lyrical depth that I always try to write. " --
K. Peake
20:25, 24 October 2022 (UTC)
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