I'm failing this article, I'm afraid. There's a lot of work to do as far as I can see, mainly on the prose and a few gritty MOS issues.
There are a number of other minor things that need to be improved. If you want any more advice, just send me a message. Most of the work will need to be done improving the history section, and re-writing the lists as prose. It's too much work to put the article on hold. Peanut4 ( talk) 23:15, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
Is the article worth B-Grade listing? Aaroncrick ( talk) 07:22, 1 December 2008 (UTC)
I'm failing this article, I'm afraid. There's a lot of work to do as far as I can see, mainly on the prose and a few gritty MOS issues.
There are a number of other minor things that need to be improved. If you want any more advice, just send me a message. Most of the work will need to be done improving the history section, and re-writing the lists as prose. It's too much work to put the article on hold. Peanut4 ( talk) 23:15, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
Is the article worth B-Grade listing? Aaroncrick ( talk) 07:22, 1 December 2008 (UTC)