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Folks, his family name is Hiruma. His given name is Yoichi. This is sooo obvious. WhisperToMe 22:10, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
I created this page for Hiruma because he is an important character in Eyeshield 21, just as important as Sena and Shin. If those two as well as the Ha-Brothers are getting special character pages, I don't see what the problem in Hiruma receiving one as well. He had more than enough information on the main Deimon page and splitting him off would save space on that page for further information on other players. - StrangerAtaru 02:50, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
Darn tootin'! I'mma do some necromancy here, because Hiruma definitely merits his own page. ShiraShira 23:52, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
Don't other schools also have the rule where after the second year they must quit? —Preceding
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The section is way too long. I feel like it should be stripped away or converted to paragraph format or something, not just a long list where every single technique is detailed, even though I've taken organizing it to its current state. Thoughts? If I don't get any, I'm gonna go ahead with it. Y BCZ ( talk) 20:53, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri ( talk · contribs) 04:53, 3 January 2014 (UTC) Taking this. ChrisGualtieri ( talk) 04:53, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
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Comments: This is one of the best articles that I have reviewed since restarting reviewing GANs again, and I mean that. I checked for issues, but there was not really too much to find faults with. The character is well covered, and far better than anything covered in similar works like those by Helen McCarthy. Which is a definite plus in my eyes. Since the only thing I found were some prose issues, let's get to the quick fixes before passing.
And to be completely fair, that's the only thing I really caught as an issue. The "other appearances" section could be filled out a little more on the details of his appearances in the Jump Super Stars and Jump Ultimate Stars titles. Going to place on hold for fixes, but very well done overall. ChrisGualtieri ( talk) 16:17, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for your review, @ ChrisGualtieri:! Could you check it? Gabriel Yuji ( talk) 03:35, 9 January 2014 (UTC)
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Folks, his family name is Hiruma. His given name is Yoichi. This is sooo obvious. WhisperToMe 22:10, 15 June 2007 (UTC)
I created this page for Hiruma because he is an important character in Eyeshield 21, just as important as Sena and Shin. If those two as well as the Ha-Brothers are getting special character pages, I don't see what the problem in Hiruma receiving one as well. He had more than enough information on the main Deimon page and splitting him off would save space on that page for further information on other players. - StrangerAtaru 02:50, 30 April 2007 (UTC)
Darn tootin'! I'mma do some necromancy here, because Hiruma definitely merits his own page. ShiraShira 23:52, 12 June 2007 (UTC)
Don't other schools also have the rule where after the second year they must quit? —Preceding
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Dragonsblast (
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contribs) 03:11, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
The section is way too long. I feel like it should be stripped away or converted to paragraph format or something, not just a long list where every single technique is detailed, even though I've taken organizing it to its current state. Thoughts? If I don't get any, I'm gonna go ahead with it. Y BCZ ( talk) 20:53, 19 October 2008 (UTC)
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Reviewer: ChrisGualtieri ( talk · contribs) 04:53, 3 January 2014 (UTC) Taking this. ChrisGualtieri ( talk) 04:53, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
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Comments: This is one of the best articles that I have reviewed since restarting reviewing GANs again, and I mean that. I checked for issues, but there was not really too much to find faults with. The character is well covered, and far better than anything covered in similar works like those by Helen McCarthy. Which is a definite plus in my eyes. Since the only thing I found were some prose issues, let's get to the quick fixes before passing.
And to be completely fair, that's the only thing I really caught as an issue. The "other appearances" section could be filled out a little more on the details of his appearances in the Jump Super Stars and Jump Ultimate Stars titles. Going to place on hold for fixes, but very well done overall. ChrisGualtieri ( talk) 16:17, 6 January 2014 (UTC)
Thank you for your review, @ ChrisGualtieri:! Could you check it? Gabriel Yuji ( talk) 03:35, 9 January 2014 (UTC)