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Hi Chiswick Chap, came here per your suggestion. I think the caption should be added to the body paragraphs as a sentence since the image does not display the sexual objectification of women doing yoga. The image is more appropriate for a Carl Jr's article. Unless we can find the actual image of the breakfast ad for this topic, the image feels out of place. MX ( ✉ • ✎) 19:47, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vortex3427 ( talk · contribs) 04:23, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this. EDIT: I might be a little slow and will add review in segments.
Yoga teachers and studios increasingly sought to indicate their status with certificates of yoga teacher training and membership of professional organisationsIs there any way you can source this information to an informational article? The current source is a page where Yoga Alliance instructs third parties on how to use their logo and is probably not a suitable citation.
first-generation yoga brands such as Iyengar Yoga being joined"and first-generation [...] were joined." Additionally, are these "brands" or "styles" (as the articles seem to say) of yoga?
"mass-marketed to the general populace"Any reason for quotation marks to be here?
Other uses, on products unrelated to yoga,"Other uses for products?"
commercialisation of yogaas it just redirects to this page.
feminist,
patriarchal capitalist consumer cultureand
materialism
Blaine explains thatbe there? It seems like a statement of fact.
Amidst a stressful family life with a wailing baby and a clueless husband who relies on her for childcare, a businesswoman who has checked into her hotel roomSeems unnecessarily lengthy. Maybe "In an advertisement, a businesswoman with a stressful family life..."
Blaine comments on the sexism implicit in the scene, and states thatCommenting on the sexism implicit in the scene, Blaine says...
Yoga has been used to sell lingerie, promising women the body of a Victoria's Secret model, over images of Lindsay Ellingson.") to be hard to understand without context. It could be split into two sentences, reading "|Yoga has been used to sell lingerie. A 2013 campaign featuring Lindsay Ellingson promised women the body of a Victoria's Secret model."
That's all from me! Ping me when you've responded to all of these.— VORTEX 3427 ( Talk!) 05:26, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
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Improved to Good Article status by Chiswick Chap ( talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke ( talk) at 01:20, 17 December 2022 (UTC).
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Hi Chiswick Chap, came here per your suggestion. I think the caption should be added to the body paragraphs as a sentence since the image does not display the sexual objectification of women doing yoga. The image is more appropriate for a Carl Jr's article. Unless we can find the actual image of the breakfast ad for this topic, the image feels out of place. MX ( ✉ • ✎) 19:47, 28 November 2022 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Vortex3427 ( talk · contribs) 04:23, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
I'll review this. EDIT: I might be a little slow and will add review in segments.
Yoga teachers and studios increasingly sought to indicate their status with certificates of yoga teacher training and membership of professional organisationsIs there any way you can source this information to an informational article? The current source is a page where Yoga Alliance instructs third parties on how to use their logo and is probably not a suitable citation.
first-generation yoga brands such as Iyengar Yoga being joined"and first-generation [...] were joined." Additionally, are these "brands" or "styles" (as the articles seem to say) of yoga?
"mass-marketed to the general populace"Any reason for quotation marks to be here?
Other uses, on products unrelated to yoga,"Other uses for products?"
commercialisation of yogaas it just redirects to this page.
feminist,
patriarchal capitalist consumer cultureand
materialism
Blaine explains thatbe there? It seems like a statement of fact.
Amidst a stressful family life with a wailing baby and a clueless husband who relies on her for childcare, a businesswoman who has checked into her hotel roomSeems unnecessarily lengthy. Maybe "In an advertisement, a businesswoman with a stressful family life..."
Blaine comments on the sexism implicit in the scene, and states thatCommenting on the sexism implicit in the scene, Blaine says...
Yoga has been used to sell lingerie, promising women the body of a Victoria's Secret model, over images of Lindsay Ellingson.") to be hard to understand without context. It could be split into two sentences, reading "|Yoga has been used to sell lingerie. A 2013 campaign featuring Lindsay Ellingson promised women the body of a Victoria's Secret model."
That's all from me! Ping me when you've responded to all of these.— VORTEX 3427 ( Talk!) 05:26, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
Bruxton (
talk)
00:33, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
Improved to Good Article status by Chiswick Chap ( talk). Nominated by Onegreatjoke ( talk) at 01:20, 17 December 2022 (UTC).