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Yes, Eddie891, I will review this article – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 05:20, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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"Yes, Virginia, there is a Santa Claus" is a line from an editorial called "Is There a Santa Claus?". The editorial appeared in The Sun on September 21, 1897, and has since become one of the most famous editorials ever published.
Christmas folklore— avoid linking two adjacent words
vituperationpage is a cross-project redirect to Wiktionary. How about linking the word directly to Wiktionary?
"forgot about it."— shouldn't full-stop be outside the quotes?
contemporary New York papers→ "contemporary New York newspapers"
The journalist David W. Dunlap— I'd remove 'the'
s the first editorial. on December 23— erroneous full-stop?
in a TV— suggestion to write it as "television"
Overall, it requires some work on references, rest, it is an excellent article! Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 10:30, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
"1897 "Yes, Virginia" Santa Claus Letter"– quoted inside quoted should take single quotations
"William Conant Church (11 August 1836-23 May 1917) and Francis Pharcellus Church (22 February 1839-11 April 1906)"– there should be en-dashes to separate those dates.
@ Eddie891 – That is it. I'll pass after these changes are made. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 14:23, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
All right then, promoting this one. – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 15:04, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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Yes, Eddie891, I will review this article – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 05:20, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
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"Yes, Virginia, there is a Santa Claus" is a line from an editorial called "Is There a Santa Claus?". The editorial appeared in The Sun on September 21, 1897, and has since become one of the most famous editorials ever published.
Christmas folklore— avoid linking two adjacent words
vituperationpage is a cross-project redirect to Wiktionary. How about linking the word directly to Wiktionary?
"forgot about it."— shouldn't full-stop be outside the quotes?
contemporary New York papers→ "contemporary New York newspapers"
The journalist David W. Dunlap— I'd remove 'the'
s the first editorial. on December 23— erroneous full-stop?
in a TV— suggestion to write it as "television"
Overall, it requires some work on references, rest, it is an excellent article! Putting on hold. – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 10:30, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
"1897 "Yes, Virginia" Santa Claus Letter"– quoted inside quoted should take single quotations
"William Conant Church (11 August 1836-23 May 1917) and Francis Pharcellus Church (22 February 1839-11 April 1906)"– there should be en-dashes to separate those dates.
@ Eddie891 – That is it. I'll pass after these changes are made. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 14:23, 1 January 2022 (UTC)
All right then, promoting this one. – Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 15:04, 1 January 2022 (UTC)