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Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this well-written and interesting article! You'll see I've made some minor changes per MOS:EDITORIAL and to tag the statement about it being "apparently a healthy place to live" (ideally, this would be clearly supported by an in-line source; if there isn't a source and it's just a conclusion drawn from no deaths occurring before 1908, then this part of the sentence should be removed). I hope that makes sense, and thank you again for your work.

Chocmilk03 ( talk) 04:26, 4 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good call. Thanks TrimmerinWiki ( talk) 11:10, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thank you for this well-written and interesting article! You'll see I've made some minor changes per MOS:EDITORIAL and to tag the statement about it being "apparently a healthy place to live" (ideally, this would be clearly supported by an in-line source; if there isn't a source and it's just a conclusion drawn from no deaths occurring before 1908, then this part of the sentence should be removed). I hope that makes sense, and thank you again for your work.

Chocmilk03 ( talk) 04:26, 4 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Good call. Thanks TrimmerinWiki ( talk) 11:10, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply

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