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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 03:09, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
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Lots of copy cleanup and one case where the citation doesn't quite justify our wording.
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2:30 p.m. or 2:30 pm.
I would suggest reducing close paraphrasing and passage similarities to the CAAP report. This is not a copyright violation because works of the Philippine government are PD under the Republic Act. You should add a {{ Source-attribution}} template noting the use of the CAAP report.
...to transport the plane to Balagbag ramp near Terminal 3 where the aircraft was unloaded.I don't have any reason to doubt it here for this fairly trivial fact.
The incident caused the shutdown of the runway and the cancellation and delay of outgoing flights. Thousands of passengers were stranded not only at the NAIA but in other airports as well. Incoming international flights had to be diverted to Clark, Cebu and Davao as well as Hong Kong, Bangkok and Tokyo.
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Sammi Brie, thank you for the review of this article. I have gone through and edited the article with the corrections you have suggested above, or slightly different in a couple of instances. With the OR concern, the subtitle of the article in the Manila Standard is "MIAA urges passengers to sue airline for resulting damages", so I think that supports "encouraged affected passengers to file lawsuits..." but like you have identified, the text of the article wasn't really a statement that they were "urging" the passengers to sue, so your proposed rewording is better. I have made that change. Please let me know if you have any further suggestions. RecycledPixels ( talk) 15:41, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 03:09, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
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Lots of copy cleanup and one case where the citation doesn't quite justify our wording.
Sammi Brie (she/her •
t •
c) 03:09, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
2:30 p.m. or 2:30 pm.
I would suggest reducing close paraphrasing and passage similarities to the CAAP report. This is not a copyright violation because works of the Philippine government are PD under the Republic Act. You should add a {{ Source-attribution}} template noting the use of the CAAP report.
...to transport the plane to Balagbag ramp near Terminal 3 where the aircraft was unloaded.I don't have any reason to doubt it here for this fairly trivial fact.
The incident caused the shutdown of the runway and the cancellation and delay of outgoing flights. Thousands of passengers were stranded not only at the NAIA but in other airports as well. Incoming international flights had to be diverted to Clark, Cebu and Davao as well as Hong Kong, Bangkok and Tokyo.
Two libre licensed images, both appropriately used. Both have alt text.
Sammi Brie, thank you for the review of this article. I have gone through and edited the article with the corrections you have suggested above, or slightly different in a couple of instances. With the OR concern, the subtitle of the article in the Manila Standard is "MIAA urges passengers to sue airline for resulting damages", so I think that supports "encouraged affected passengers to file lawsuits..." but like you have identified, the text of the article wasn't really a statement that they were "urging" the passengers to sue, so your proposed rewording is better. I have made that change. Please let me know if you have any further suggestions. RecycledPixels ( talk) 15:41, 8 August 2023 (UTC)