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Hello! @ Spintendo: I noticed you removed the content about the Wyss Campaign for Nature per WP:FUTURE. I understand if a few problematic details should be trimmed, but does the entire section need to be removed? The campaign is ongoing, funds have been distributed, the donation and goals are significant, and there's lots of secondary coverage. Of course, the 2030 goals are future-oriented, but the campaign itself is very much in the works. Here was the content:
References
Gibbens
was invoked but never defined (see the
help page).Can you clarify which content in particular is problematic? I assume the campaign should be mentioned in some form, but a standalone subsection under "Conservation" may not be necessary. Spintendo, would you care to take a stab at appropriate text, or if you can clarify what's wrong, I can try to trim the text.
Is this just a tense problem? For example, should the text say "The campaign is working to convince the parties..." instead of "The campaign will work to convince the parties...", and "National Geographic Society is documenting..." instead of National Geographic Society will document...", etc?
The campaign launched in 2018, so I'm not fully understanding how WP:FUTURE applies. @ Chetsford: I am curious if you have any thoughts here as well, since you moved the draft into the main space. Thanks in advance to you both for any help. Inkian Jason ( talk) 20:44, 1 May 2019 (UTC)
Wikipedia should ideally be about past events. But this paragraph deals little with the past — it's mostly about future, hoped for events yet to occur. When it does mention the past, it places those claims in sentences which arguably contain more future events. Let's look at this paragraph sentence by sentence.
Sentences and their claims | Timeframe | Comments |
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In 2018, Hansjörg Wyss pledged $1 billion and the Wyss Foundation launched the Wyss Campaign for Nature with the goal of helping to protect 30 percent of the planet by 2030. | Past Present and Future ( c. 2030) |
This claim is not clear in its wording—it deals with future goals and present acts which could also be described as past events: pledging (or pledged) money. I would add that even though pledge/ing is described as a past/present event, the root word pledge itself means "a promise to pay", so that the main thrust of the sentence describes something which has yet to happen. Only the promise, or the pledge, places it in the past/present. "Launched" also places it in the past, but the question then becomes what are we placing in the past with the word launched. The particulars around a launch — which in this instance most-likely means an announcement of actions which are planned to take place, rather than the actual actions having occurred — places this sentence on the fence for what it is communicating here. Using the word goal with launched and pledged places it in the past and the future. |
The campaign was launched as a partnership with the National Geographic Society, The Nature Conservancy, and other non-governmental organizations. | Past | The only sentence featuring a claim which has undoubtedly already occurred, it is nonetheless problematic for another reason: "other non-governmental organizations", which means nothing, as it is four words which describe both anything and nothing. |
The campaign will work to convince the parties to the Convention on Biological Diversity, which will be next held in Beijing in 2020, to commit to protecting 30 percent of the world's lands and oceans by 2030 through creating and funding the management of protected areas. | Future ( c. 2020–2030) |
Parts of the text mentioning when these actions will take effect ("The campaign will work to convince") make it clear it's a future action. I might add that this future action is an act of convincing (which implies future, because someone already swayed would be described as convinced). This 10 year-long act of convincing is clearly an ongoing event with an end date set for the future. The words creating and funding are both present tense, but apply in this case to the future. |
The Wyss Campaign for Nature will also increase its direct support to locally driven conservation projects. | Future | "will also increase" makes this abundantly clear it's a future action |
Upon its launch, the Wyss Campaign for Nature pledged $48 million to conservation projects which will help protect approximately 10 million acres in 13 countries, as well as 17,000 square kilometers of ocean. | Present and Future |
This is two claims placed under one sentence. Although the pledging of the $48 million places it in the present (which I'll repeat is not actually paying, but rather pledging to pay) the main thrust of the sentence is the protection of the various areas of land and ocean, which are future events (undoubtedly after any "pledge" to pay is actually paid for) |
Organizations initially receiving grants include Aves Argentinas, Fundación Flora y Fauna, Fundatia Conservation Carpathia, the Gonarezhou Conservation Trust, and The Nature Conservancy. | Past | This sentence is unique in that it is the only non-problematic mentioning of a past event in the entire paragraph. But when one looks closely, even the granting of funds appears to be a multi-step process with the use of the phrase "Organizations initially receiving grants", which implies that the receiving of grants is a process which is in its initial stages — as if some as-yet determined act needs to occur for the transfer of funds from the grants to be completed and therefore fully placed as a past event. [a] |
The Nature Conservancy was granted funds to expand its Blue Bonds for Conservation program in the Caribbean, and to conserve more than 200,000 acres of Australia's Murray–Darling basin. | Past and Future |
Again, this is multiple claims placed into one sentence. The granting of funds can be described as something which has already happened (unless it's an initial granting of funds as in the sentence above) but the conservation is arguably a future (or at least ongoing) event |
As part of the partnership, the National Geographic Society will document and share stories about conservation successes and setbacks. | Future | As this claim describes drawing up a balance sheet of success and failures which have yet to occur, this clearly is a future event. |
Regards, Spintendo 07:55, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
Notes
"Citibank was initially receiving payments from Ms. Sparkling postmarked with her Dade county address. After she moved to Ft. Myers, Citibank received the remainder of her payments postmarked with the Ft Myers address."Furthermore, the plural "grants" leaves open the assumption, again for those unfamiliar with how grants are bestowed, whether or not the payments are made in one payment or in installments. The organizations themselves being described as receiving "grants" strongly implies that they received multiple grants or one grant in installments. The assumption may be that organizations receive "a grant" if it was one grant paid at one time, thus this may be a better way to describe a grant versus grants plural.
Based on User:Spintendo's feedback above, I'm submitting a request to add back a short mention of the Wyss Campaign for Nature, which is an ongoing campaign and has already distributed funds, according to appropriate secondary coverage. This source says, "Of the grants already awarded, the Nature Conservancy received $6.9 million to expand its Blue Bonds for Conservation program in the Caribbean and create a sustainable agriculture zone and protected area covering more than 200,000 acres in Australia's Murray-Darling Basin." I propose adding the following text to the article:
References
I understand the campaign has future goals, but that's true of many conservation projects. I've tried to draft language focusing on the past, as requested, but I've kept "which has a goal of protecting 30 percent of the planet by 2030" so there's some description of the campaign's general purpose. Again, the campaign has received significant coverage (searching "Wyss Campaign for Nature" at Google News yields hundreds of returns), so at least minimal mention seems appropriate. I hope this satisfies User:Spintendo's concerns above, and I'm open to text adjustments. Thanks. Inkian Jason ( talk) 18:21, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
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On behalf of the Wyss Foundation, I propose adding mention of the organization's funding of the Wyss Institute for Biologically Inspired Engineering. There are several recently published sources confirming the project, including Harvard. I propose adding:
References
This seems like a straightforward update, but I don't edit the main space directly so I'm seeking assistance from another editor to review and update the article on my behalf. Thanks for your consideration. Inkian Jason ( talk) 20:16, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
According to the New York Times on April 13, 2021: "Long before he emerged as a potential champion of journalism with his bid for Tribune Publishing, the Swiss billionaire Hansjörg Wyss quietly created a sophisticated political operation to advance progressive policy initiatives and the Democrats who support them. The organization, called The Hub Project, was started in 2015 by one of Mr. Wyss’s charitable organizations, the Wyss Foundation, partly to shape media coverage to help Democratic causes. It now has 60 employees, according to its website, including political organizers, researchers and communications specialists. Mr. Wyss and his charitable foundation are not mentioned on The Hub Project’s website, and his role in its creation has not been previously reported." [emphasis added] Novellasyes ( talk) 13:41, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
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Hello! I'm here on behalf of the Wyss Foundation with an edit request. On August 28, an IP address editor added new text to the Conservation subsection. The new text claims that the Campaign for Nature is "highly criticized by indigenous rights groups, human rights organizations and the environmental movement" and is supported by two citations—a June post on a website called Open Democracy [1] and a March article from the New York Times [2]. Neither of these sources make any reference to the Wyss Foundation or Campaign for Nature. Both do, though, detail criticisms of the 30x30 initiative more generally.
It seems like a separate article about 30x30 would be a better place to detail endorsements and criticisms of the plan. That said, I can understand why some mention of criticisms would seem relevant here, so I've attempted to revise this paragraph so that more context is present about the Wyss Foundation's support for Indigenous-led conservation efforts. I have also replaced citations that linked to the Wyss Foundation website with third-party, reliable sources. Can someone please review this revised paragraph and, if they feel it meets Wikipedia requirements and improves the Wyss Foundation article, make the update?
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In 2018, the Wyss Foundation launched the Wyss Campaign for Nature, pledging that it would donate $1 billion to the project. [3] The campaign aims to protect 30% of the world's surface by 2030. [3] [4] The campaign is backed by the National Geographic Society and other international conservation organizations. [3] The 30x30 plan has been criticized by some indigenous rights activists for potentially dispossessing human inhabitants from historically occupied land. [5] [6] Other tribal organizations and leaders have endorsed the initiative, however. [7] [8] The Wyss Foundation has financially supported Indigenous-led conservation efforts, [9] including the effort to establish the Qat'Muk Central Purcell Mountains Indigenous Protected and Conserved Area in British Columbia, the Dehcho First Nations-led management plan for the Edéhzhíe National Wildlife Area in the Northwest Territories, and the Indigenous-led Gayini conservation project, a sustainable conservation area in Australia’s Murray Darling Basin. [10] [11] [12] The foundation also supported the retirement of oil and gas leases within the Badger-Two Medicine area of the Lewis and Clark National Forest in support of a Blackfeet-led "Traditional Cultural District". [13] [14] References
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Thank you. ZH for Wyss Foundation ( talk) 18:18, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
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Hello! I'm here on behalf of the Wyss Foundation with another edit request. Looking at other foundation pages on Wikipedia, I noticed that there is more information about the Wyss Foundation that can be included in the infobox table to give readers a quick reference for key facts.
The items I'd like to ask editors to add are:
References
Aside from the type and legal status, the other details are covered in the overall Wikipedia article, so I have not provided specific references for them. Can someone please review and make these additions if they are appropriate?
Thank you. ZH for Wyss Foundation ( talk) 15:48, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Please add a detailed non-free use rationale for each article the image is used in, which must also declare compliance with the other parts of the non-free content criteria, as well as the source of the work and copyright information.See the image page for more links and information. Happy Editing-- IAm Chaos 05:00, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
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Hello! I am here on behalf of the Wyss Foundation with a follow-up to my last edit request. Thanks so much to IAmChaos for making the infobox changes, and thanks to Z1720 for the nudge about the logo.
The logo is re-uploaded and I've taken care to fill in the fair use rationale: File:Wyss Foundation logo.png
The note about the rationale on the image page seems to be pro-forma and it looks like someone needs to review the image and confirm that the rationale is complete. I noticed last time that if it hasn't been added to an article then it gets deleted very quickly. Could someone please review the image and add it to the article so that it doesn't get deleted again?
Also, can the Purpose parameter be added to the infobox, with the following listed: Conservation, education, advocacy
Can someone please review and make these additions if they are appropriate?
Thank you. ZH for Wyss Foundation ( talk) 20:23, 8 April 2022 (UTC)
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Hello! @ Spintendo: I noticed you removed the content about the Wyss Campaign for Nature per WP:FUTURE. I understand if a few problematic details should be trimmed, but does the entire section need to be removed? The campaign is ongoing, funds have been distributed, the donation and goals are significant, and there's lots of secondary coverage. Of course, the 2030 goals are future-oriented, but the campaign itself is very much in the works. Here was the content:
References
Gibbens
was invoked but never defined (see the
help page).Can you clarify which content in particular is problematic? I assume the campaign should be mentioned in some form, but a standalone subsection under "Conservation" may not be necessary. Spintendo, would you care to take a stab at appropriate text, or if you can clarify what's wrong, I can try to trim the text.
Is this just a tense problem? For example, should the text say "The campaign is working to convince the parties..." instead of "The campaign will work to convince the parties...", and "National Geographic Society is documenting..." instead of National Geographic Society will document...", etc?
The campaign launched in 2018, so I'm not fully understanding how WP:FUTURE applies. @ Chetsford: I am curious if you have any thoughts here as well, since you moved the draft into the main space. Thanks in advance to you both for any help. Inkian Jason ( talk) 20:44, 1 May 2019 (UTC)
Wikipedia should ideally be about past events. But this paragraph deals little with the past — it's mostly about future, hoped for events yet to occur. When it does mention the past, it places those claims in sentences which arguably contain more future events. Let's look at this paragraph sentence by sentence.
Sentences and their claims | Timeframe | Comments |
---|---|---|
In 2018, Hansjörg Wyss pledged $1 billion and the Wyss Foundation launched the Wyss Campaign for Nature with the goal of helping to protect 30 percent of the planet by 2030. | Past Present and Future ( c. 2030) |
This claim is not clear in its wording—it deals with future goals and present acts which could also be described as past events: pledging (or pledged) money. I would add that even though pledge/ing is described as a past/present event, the root word pledge itself means "a promise to pay", so that the main thrust of the sentence describes something which has yet to happen. Only the promise, or the pledge, places it in the past/present. "Launched" also places it in the past, but the question then becomes what are we placing in the past with the word launched. The particulars around a launch — which in this instance most-likely means an announcement of actions which are planned to take place, rather than the actual actions having occurred — places this sentence on the fence for what it is communicating here. Using the word goal with launched and pledged places it in the past and the future. |
The campaign was launched as a partnership with the National Geographic Society, The Nature Conservancy, and other non-governmental organizations. | Past | The only sentence featuring a claim which has undoubtedly already occurred, it is nonetheless problematic for another reason: "other non-governmental organizations", which means nothing, as it is four words which describe both anything and nothing. |
The campaign will work to convince the parties to the Convention on Biological Diversity, which will be next held in Beijing in 2020, to commit to protecting 30 percent of the world's lands and oceans by 2030 through creating and funding the management of protected areas. | Future ( c. 2020–2030) |
Parts of the text mentioning when these actions will take effect ("The campaign will work to convince") make it clear it's a future action. I might add that this future action is an act of convincing (which implies future, because someone already swayed would be described as convinced). This 10 year-long act of convincing is clearly an ongoing event with an end date set for the future. The words creating and funding are both present tense, but apply in this case to the future. |
The Wyss Campaign for Nature will also increase its direct support to locally driven conservation projects. | Future | "will also increase" makes this abundantly clear it's a future action |
Upon its launch, the Wyss Campaign for Nature pledged $48 million to conservation projects which will help protect approximately 10 million acres in 13 countries, as well as 17,000 square kilometers of ocean. | Present and Future |
This is two claims placed under one sentence. Although the pledging of the $48 million places it in the present (which I'll repeat is not actually paying, but rather pledging to pay) the main thrust of the sentence is the protection of the various areas of land and ocean, which are future events (undoubtedly after any "pledge" to pay is actually paid for) |
Organizations initially receiving grants include Aves Argentinas, Fundación Flora y Fauna, Fundatia Conservation Carpathia, the Gonarezhou Conservation Trust, and The Nature Conservancy. | Past | This sentence is unique in that it is the only non-problematic mentioning of a past event in the entire paragraph. But when one looks closely, even the granting of funds appears to be a multi-step process with the use of the phrase "Organizations initially receiving grants", which implies that the receiving of grants is a process which is in its initial stages — as if some as-yet determined act needs to occur for the transfer of funds from the grants to be completed and therefore fully placed as a past event. [a] |
The Nature Conservancy was granted funds to expand its Blue Bonds for Conservation program in the Caribbean, and to conserve more than 200,000 acres of Australia's Murray–Darling basin. | Past and Future |
Again, this is multiple claims placed into one sentence. The granting of funds can be described as something which has already happened (unless it's an initial granting of funds as in the sentence above) but the conservation is arguably a future (or at least ongoing) event |
As part of the partnership, the National Geographic Society will document and share stories about conservation successes and setbacks. | Future | As this claim describes drawing up a balance sheet of success and failures which have yet to occur, this clearly is a future event. |
Regards, Spintendo 07:55, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
Notes
"Citibank was initially receiving payments from Ms. Sparkling postmarked with her Dade county address. After she moved to Ft. Myers, Citibank received the remainder of her payments postmarked with the Ft Myers address."Furthermore, the plural "grants" leaves open the assumption, again for those unfamiliar with how grants are bestowed, whether or not the payments are made in one payment or in installments. The organizations themselves being described as receiving "grants" strongly implies that they received multiple grants or one grant in installments. The assumption may be that organizations receive "a grant" if it was one grant paid at one time, thus this may be a better way to describe a grant versus grants plural.
Based on User:Spintendo's feedback above, I'm submitting a request to add back a short mention of the Wyss Campaign for Nature, which is an ongoing campaign and has already distributed funds, according to appropriate secondary coverage. This source says, "Of the grants already awarded, the Nature Conservancy received $6.9 million to expand its Blue Bonds for Conservation program in the Caribbean and create a sustainable agriculture zone and protected area covering more than 200,000 acres in Australia's Murray-Darling Basin." I propose adding the following text to the article:
References
I understand the campaign has future goals, but that's true of many conservation projects. I've tried to draft language focusing on the past, as requested, but I've kept "which has a goal of protecting 30 percent of the planet by 2030" so there's some description of the campaign's general purpose. Again, the campaign has received significant coverage (searching "Wyss Campaign for Nature" at Google News yields hundreds of returns), so at least minimal mention seems appropriate. I hope this satisfies User:Spintendo's concerns above, and I'm open to text adjustments. Thanks. Inkian Jason ( talk) 18:21, 5 June 2019 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
On behalf of the Wyss Foundation, I propose adding mention of the organization's funding of the Wyss Institute for Biologically Inspired Engineering. There are several recently published sources confirming the project, including Harvard. I propose adding:
References
This seems like a straightforward update, but I don't edit the main space directly so I'm seeking assistance from another editor to review and update the article on my behalf. Thanks for your consideration. Inkian Jason ( talk) 20:16, 7 June 2019 (UTC)
According to the New York Times on April 13, 2021: "Long before he emerged as a potential champion of journalism with his bid for Tribune Publishing, the Swiss billionaire Hansjörg Wyss quietly created a sophisticated political operation to advance progressive policy initiatives and the Democrats who support them. The organization, called The Hub Project, was started in 2015 by one of Mr. Wyss’s charitable organizations, the Wyss Foundation, partly to shape media coverage to help Democratic causes. It now has 60 employees, according to its website, including political organizers, researchers and communications specialists. Mr. Wyss and his charitable foundation are not mentioned on The Hub Project’s website, and his role in its creation has not been previously reported." [emphasis added] Novellasyes ( talk) 13:41, 14 April 2021 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello! I'm here on behalf of the Wyss Foundation with an edit request. On August 28, an IP address editor added new text to the Conservation subsection. The new text claims that the Campaign for Nature is "highly criticized by indigenous rights groups, human rights organizations and the environmental movement" and is supported by two citations—a June post on a website called Open Democracy [1] and a March article from the New York Times [2]. Neither of these sources make any reference to the Wyss Foundation or Campaign for Nature. Both do, though, detail criticisms of the 30x30 initiative more generally.
It seems like a separate article about 30x30 would be a better place to detail endorsements and criticisms of the plan. That said, I can understand why some mention of criticisms would seem relevant here, so I've attempted to revise this paragraph so that more context is present about the Wyss Foundation's support for Indigenous-led conservation efforts. I have also replaced citations that linked to the Wyss Foundation website with third-party, reliable sources. Can someone please review this revised paragraph and, if they feel it meets Wikipedia requirements and improves the Wyss Foundation article, make the update?
New paragraph
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In 2018, the Wyss Foundation launched the Wyss Campaign for Nature, pledging that it would donate $1 billion to the project. [3] The campaign aims to protect 30% of the world's surface by 2030. [3] [4] The campaign is backed by the National Geographic Society and other international conservation organizations. [3] The 30x30 plan has been criticized by some indigenous rights activists for potentially dispossessing human inhabitants from historically occupied land. [5] [6] Other tribal organizations and leaders have endorsed the initiative, however. [7] [8] The Wyss Foundation has financially supported Indigenous-led conservation efforts, [9] including the effort to establish the Qat'Muk Central Purcell Mountains Indigenous Protected and Conserved Area in British Columbia, the Dehcho First Nations-led management plan for the Edéhzhíe National Wildlife Area in the Northwest Territories, and the Indigenous-led Gayini conservation project, a sustainable conservation area in Australia’s Murray Darling Basin. [10] [11] [12] The foundation also supported the retirement of oil and gas leases within the Badger-Two Medicine area of the Lewis and Clark National Forest in support of a Blackfeet-led "Traditional Cultural District". [13] [14] References
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Thank you. ZH for Wyss Foundation ( talk) 18:18, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello! I'm here on behalf of the Wyss Foundation with another edit request. Looking at other foundation pages on Wikipedia, I noticed that there is more information about the Wyss Foundation that can be included in the infobox table to give readers a quick reference for key facts.
The items I'd like to ask editors to add are:
References
Aside from the type and legal status, the other details are covered in the overall Wikipedia article, so I have not provided specific references for them. Can someone please review and make these additions if they are appropriate?
Thank you. ZH for Wyss Foundation ( talk) 15:48, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
Please add a detailed non-free use rationale for each article the image is used in, which must also declare compliance with the other parts of the non-free content criteria, as well as the source of the work and copyright information.See the image page for more links and information. Happy Editing-- IAm Chaos 05:00, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello! I am here on behalf of the Wyss Foundation with a follow-up to my last edit request. Thanks so much to IAmChaos for making the infobox changes, and thanks to Z1720 for the nudge about the logo.
The logo is re-uploaded and I've taken care to fill in the fair use rationale: File:Wyss Foundation logo.png
The note about the rationale on the image page seems to be pro-forma and it looks like someone needs to review the image and confirm that the rationale is complete. I noticed last time that if it hasn't been added to an article then it gets deleted very quickly. Could someone please review the image and add it to the article so that it doesn't get deleted again?
Also, can the Purpose parameter be added to the infobox, with the following listed: Conservation, education, advocacy
Can someone please review and make these additions if they are appropriate?
Thank you. ZH for Wyss Foundation ( talk) 20:23, 8 April 2022 (UTC)