"7-mile (11 km) ..." although I've been recommending reducing the "accuracy" of these kinds of digits, I think we can safely go to at least one decimal place here.
Fixed.
Is there a link for "expressway"?
Added.
"The $36 million project" inflate.
Removed from the lead, since an inflation conversion would require a citation here.
"The 7-mile-long (11 km), two-lane..." see first comment, applies here too.
Fixed.
"of average annual daily traffic" according to our article, it's "annual average daily traffic".
Fixed.
"on WYO 220 was proposed" overlinked.
Fixed.
"the Wyoming Department of Transportation in " overlinked and already abbreviated.
Fixed.
"not answering public feedback" would "responding to" feedback make more sense?
Fixed, though in this case it was a matter of not even picking up the phone (which is a bit weird).
"$37 million " inflate. And any following figures.
Added.
"the U.S. Congress" do we really need U.S. here?
Fixed.
"including the North Platte River bridge" overlinked.
"7-mile (11 km) ..." although I've been recommending reducing the "accuracy" of these kinds of digits, I think we can safely go to at least one decimal place here.
Fixed.
Is there a link for "expressway"?
Added.
"The $36 million project" inflate.
Removed from the lead, since an inflation conversion would require a citation here.
"The 7-mile-long (11 km), two-lane..." see first comment, applies here too.
Fixed.
"of average annual daily traffic" according to our article, it's "annual average daily traffic".
Fixed.
"on WYO 220 was proposed" overlinked.
Fixed.
"the Wyoming Department of Transportation in " overlinked and already abbreviated.
Fixed.
"not answering public feedback" would "responding to" feedback make more sense?
Fixed, though in this case it was a matter of not even picking up the phone (which is a bit weird).
"$37 million " inflate. And any following figures.
Added.
"the U.S. Congress" do we really need U.S. here?
Fixed.
"including the North Platte River bridge" overlinked.