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Originally, Fantasy Ride was announced to be divided into three different discs, each representing a particular sound. Ungrammatical, rewrite in good plain English.
The song and "High Price" were at one point in contention of serving as the album's lead single Ungrammatical.
The song's hook consists of repeated shouty remarks to "Work! Work!" "shouty"?
Overuse of "The song" as the start of sentences.
Sarah Rodman of The Boston Globe named the song the album's most essential and praised Elliott as the best guest artist "most essential"
'' Andy Kellman of Allmusic was negative on the song, rewrite in good plain English.
On the issue dated July 11, 2009, "Work" entered the UK Singles Chart at number 71. "On"?
In its third week, it rose four placements to acquire a peak of number 52 "placements"?
'' Ciara then signals her dancers to a sand dune in front of the site, for a group choreography, all wearing white tops, torn blue jeans, ????
This is not reasonably good prose, please find someone who can write good plain English to copy-edit throughout.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Originally, Fantasy Ride was announced to be divided into three different discs, each representing a particular sound. Ungrammatical, rewrite in good plain English.
The song and "High Price" were at one point in contention of serving as the album's lead single Ungrammatical.
The song's hook consists of repeated shouty remarks to "Work! Work!" "shouty"?
Overuse of "The song" as the start of sentences.
Sarah Rodman of The Boston Globe named the song the album's most essential and praised Elliott as the best guest artist "most essential"
'' Andy Kellman of Allmusic was negative on the song, rewrite in good plain English.
On the issue dated July 11, 2009, "Work" entered the UK Singles Chart at number 71. "On"?
In its third week, it rose four placements to acquire a peak of number 52 "placements"?
'' Ciara then signals her dancers to a sand dune in front of the site, for a group choreography, all wearing white tops, torn blue jeans, ????
This is not reasonably good prose, please find someone who can write good plain English to copy-edit throughout.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.