Released as the second single from MercyMe's 2002 album Spoken For, "Word of God Speak" attained massive success on Christian radio, spending twenty-three weeks atop the Christian Songs chart, a record for that chart; it spent a total of seventy-six weeks on that chart - Ummm where's the period?
I see a period at the end.
There are too many sentences with the word "the song" - needs a variety
Done, I think
If FN#1 covers the first para then only added at the end of the first para instead of having it at every period as well as for FN#2
Done
Why do readers need to know about "Spoken For"? This article is about "Word of God Speak"
"and has a tempo" - whats the tempo? Is it a downtempo, mid-tempo, moderate tempo, or an up-tempo?
Not sure how to add that without inserting OR - the only thing given in the source is a tempo, along with a bizarre and probably non-applicable description of it
"The music to "Word of God Speak" is simple," - is orish and violates
WP:NPOV
Changed to 'stripped down', per the source
"which reflect on the idea that it is impossible to speak of an infinite God with a limited vocabulary." - is in the lead, so this sentence should not be the same (re-write the lyrical content in another way)
I am guessing that Russ Breimeier was the author of "prayer and worship are not flowery orations", please give credits to Breimeier in the previous section
Done
"had tremendous success as a single" - another orish and violation of WP:NPOV sentence
Removed
Too many sentences has "on the chart" - needs a variety
Done
For "Charts" only wikilink publications and charts once
For one, I used it on my GA "
I Can Only Imagine" - the 'Track listing' section is copied over from that page, as "Word of God Speak" is "Imagine"'s A-side. I don't see why it doesn't work for this.
Released as the second single from MercyMe's 2002 album Spoken For, "Word of God Speak" attained massive success on Christian radio, spending twenty-three weeks atop the Christian Songs chart, a record for that chart; it spent a total of seventy-six weeks on that chart - Ummm where's the period?
I see a period at the end.
There are too many sentences with the word "the song" - needs a variety
Done, I think
If FN#1 covers the first para then only added at the end of the first para instead of having it at every period as well as for FN#2
Done
Why do readers need to know about "Spoken For"? This article is about "Word of God Speak"
"and has a tempo" - whats the tempo? Is it a downtempo, mid-tempo, moderate tempo, or an up-tempo?
Not sure how to add that without inserting OR - the only thing given in the source is a tempo, along with a bizarre and probably non-applicable description of it
"The music to "Word of God Speak" is simple," - is orish and violates
WP:NPOV
Changed to 'stripped down', per the source
"which reflect on the idea that it is impossible to speak of an infinite God with a limited vocabulary." - is in the lead, so this sentence should not be the same (re-write the lyrical content in another way)
I am guessing that Russ Breimeier was the author of "prayer and worship are not flowery orations", please give credits to Breimeier in the previous section
Done
"had tremendous success as a single" - another orish and violation of WP:NPOV sentence
Removed
Too many sentences has "on the chart" - needs a variety
Done
For "Charts" only wikilink publications and charts once
For one, I used it on my GA "
I Can Only Imagine" - the 'Track listing' section is copied over from that page, as "Word of God Speak" is "Imagine"'s A-side. I don't see why it doesn't work for this.