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POV wording

The article needs a rewrite from a neutral point of view. I've done some, but the entire thing is littered with unsourced and POV claims. I just removed about a quarter of the solutions section as it had highly charged wording, which has no place on Wikipedia. It seriously reads as though an involved charity wrote the article. Thanks Jenova 20 ( email) 13:42, 27 February 2013 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

POV wording

The article needs a rewrite from a neutral point of view. I've done some, but the entire thing is littered with unsourced and POV claims. I just removed about a quarter of the solutions section as it had highly charged wording, which has no place on Wikipedia. It seriously reads as though an involved charity wrote the article. Thanks Jenova 20 ( email) 13:42, 27 February 2013 (UTC) reply


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