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Reviewer: Rjjiii ( talk · contribs) 05:07, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I'm not sure if you have contributed to the article under other IP addresses or under a user name, but it's expected that nominators are significant contributors to an article they put up for GA ( Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions).
Regardless, there are significant issues with the writing throughout the article. Much of the article consists of a dense series of facts. If you are a contributor and would like specific examples to help with future improvement, let me know, Rjjiii ( talk) 05:07, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
Windows 8 is a major release of the Windows NT operating system developed by Microsoft. It was released to manufacturing on August 1, 2012; it was subsequently made available for download via MSDN and TechNet on August 15, 2012, and later to retail on October 26, 2012.
Windows 8 development started before Windows 7 had shipped in 2009. At the Consumer Electronics Show in January 2011, it was announced that the next version of Windows would add support for ARM System-on-chips alongside the existing 32-bit processors produced by vendors, especially AMD and Intel.
The traditional Blue Screen of Death (BSoD) was replaced by a new black screen, although it was later reverted to a different blue color.
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Reviewer: Rjjiii ( talk · contribs) 05:07, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
Hello, I'm not sure if you have contributed to the article under other IP addresses or under a user name, but it's expected that nominators are significant contributors to an article they put up for GA ( Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions).
Regardless, there are significant issues with the writing throughout the article. Much of the article consists of a dense series of facts. If you are a contributor and would like specific examples to help with future improvement, let me know, Rjjiii ( talk) 05:07, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
Windows 8 is a major release of the Windows NT operating system developed by Microsoft. It was released to manufacturing on August 1, 2012; it was subsequently made available for download via MSDN and TechNet on August 15, 2012, and later to retail on October 26, 2012.
Windows 8 development started before Windows 7 had shipped in 2009. At the Consumer Electronics Show in January 2011, it was announced that the next version of Windows would add support for ARM System-on-chips alongside the existing 32-bit processors produced by vendors, especially AMD and Intel.
The traditional Blue Screen of Death (BSoD) was replaced by a new black screen, although it was later reverted to a different blue color.