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This is a thorough article. Before I act on the good Article Assessment, I suggest that you pay attention to a few of your "awkward" moments. For example:
I suggest that you ask one of the guild of copy editors to give you some assistance in this. Basically, style and punctuation are between you and the Good article. Drop a line on my user discussion page when you've got it in order -- these are minor details, but they will make a difference in the clarity of your prose. thanks for the hard work! -- Auntieruth55 ( talk) 18:21, 30 May 2009 (UTC)
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This is a thorough article. Before I act on the good Article Assessment, I suggest that you pay attention to a few of your "awkward" moments. For example:
I suggest that you ask one of the guild of copy editors to give you some assistance in this. Basically, style and punctuation are between you and the Good article. Drop a line on my user discussion page when you've got it in order -- these are minor details, but they will make a difference in the clarity of your prose. thanks for the hard work! -- Auntieruth55 ( talk) 18:21, 30 May 2009 (UTC)