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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) ( talk · contribs) 15:05, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

• A few comments:

• Are you sure ancestry.com is the only source for his father's and mother's names?

  I've added an additional source, from the 1940 census. Hawkeye7 ( talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

• Only an isbn or an oclc is needed, not both.

  WP:CITE does not say "but not both". Hawkeye7 ( talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

• External links typically go after the references.

  Moved. Hawkeye7 ( talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

• Ref #2 is a dead link.

  It works for me, but you may need a newspapers.com subscription. Added a "subscription required" tag to the reference. Fixed two instances of link rot I found. Hawkeye7 ( talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

• The first long cite should have an identifier.

  Added OCLC. Hawkeye7 ( talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

• All from me-- Tomandjerry211 (alt) ( talk) 15:05, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

Thanks for your review! Hawkeye7 ( talk) 19:57, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply

• Passing, Well done!-- Tomandjerry211 (alt) ( talk) 21:19, 2 September 2015 (UTC) reply