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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet ( talk · contribs) 13:50, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
As with Talk:William J. Murphy (Jesuit)/GA1, not expecting to have too much to pick at.
McGarry attended Hamilton grammar school, and in 1904, McGarry enrolled at Boston College High Schoolis somewhat repetitive. Is his pre-high-school education relevant in the first place?
In his fourth year, McGarry taught astronomy, French, and mathematics, as well as a philosophy class for pre-medical students, at the university.I'm not sold on the necessity of the "at the university" clause.
More to come. Vaticidal prophet 13:50, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet ( talk · contribs) 13:50, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
As with Talk:William J. Murphy (Jesuit)/GA1, not expecting to have too much to pick at.
McGarry attended Hamilton grammar school, and in 1904, McGarry enrolled at Boston College High Schoolis somewhat repetitive. Is his pre-high-school education relevant in the first place?
In his fourth year, McGarry taught astronomy, French, and mathematics, as well as a philosophy class for pre-medical students, at the university.I'm not sold on the necessity of the "at the university" clause.
More to come. Vaticidal prophet 13:50, 25 August 2023 (UTC)