"Brault attended St. Luke Grade School and St. Francis Xavier grade school before graduating from Catholic Central High School..." It's best to clarify where the schools were located. Reading the next section it sounds like he grew up in Green Bay, but that is not clear here, and it should be. I'd even recommend moving the first half of the first sentence of the "Business" section ("In 1939, the Brault family moved to Green Bay, Wisconsin" to the "Early life" section. To help with the flow, the "Business" section could start "After moving to Green Bay, the Brault family opened a restaurant, Brault's Cafe, on Main Street. Brault began his career working with his father at the restaurant.", or something like that.
"Brault became associated with tourism after the local chamber of commerce asked him to assist with the formation of the Green Bay Visitor and Convention Bureau." Is there a timeline for when the chamber of commerce reached out?
"Brault attended St. Luke Grade School and St. Francis Xavier grade school before graduating from Catholic Central High School..." It's best to clarify where the schools were located. Reading the next section it sounds like he grew up in Green Bay, but that is not clear here, and it should be. I'd even recommend moving the first half of the first sentence of the "Business" section ("In 1939, the Brault family moved to Green Bay, Wisconsin" to the "Early life" section. To help with the flow, the "Business" section could start "After moving to Green Bay, the Brault family opened a restaurant, Brault's Cafe, on Main Street. Brault began his career working with his father at the restaurant.", or something like that.
"Brault became associated with tourism after the local chamber of commerce asked him to assist with the formation of the Green Bay Visitor and Convention Bureau." Is there a timeline for when the chamber of commerce reached out?