I've trimmed a bit on the lead, I'm not sure there is much more fat to cut. The article is 71KB, and
WP:LEDE recommends 3 to 4 paragraphs for any article over 35KB.
Moved the paragraph.
Ealdgyth -
Talk 13:31, 17 February 2009 (UTC)reply
It's almost there. Just two other items:
Citations 1 and 2 should list the publisher of the websites. (IMO, Citation #2 ( Patron Saint Index entry on Saint Wilfrid accessed on 12 September 2007 ) is a marginally reliable source, but I won't challenge it.)
They have been added, but they had full citations in the references section.
Ealdgyth -
Talk 02:36, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Please add commas between the author and the work for all citations unless you can point me to an accepted citation style which omits punctuation between the two.
That system has been accepted at FAC for nine FAs I've nominated, but I've added the commas per your request.
Ealdgyth -
Talk 02:36, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Those are the final two items. Cheers,
Majoreditor (
talk) 00:46, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Job well done once again, Ealdgyth. GA Pass. Cheers,
Majoreditor (
talk) 02:55, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Very unimportant footnote to issue raised above re. punctuation in citations, just in case anyone's interested:
WP:CITE#HOW says: "There are a number of styles used in different fields. They all include the same information but vary in punctuation and the order of the author's name, publication date, title, and page numbers. Any of these styles is acceptable on Wikipedia so long as articles are internally consistent."
almost-
instinct 17:40, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
I've trimmed a bit on the lead, I'm not sure there is much more fat to cut. The article is 71KB, and
WP:LEDE recommends 3 to 4 paragraphs for any article over 35KB.
Moved the paragraph.
Ealdgyth -
Talk 13:31, 17 February 2009 (UTC)reply
It's almost there. Just two other items:
Citations 1 and 2 should list the publisher of the websites. (IMO, Citation #2 ( Patron Saint Index entry on Saint Wilfrid accessed on 12 September 2007 ) is a marginally reliable source, but I won't challenge it.)
They have been added, but they had full citations in the references section.
Ealdgyth -
Talk 02:36, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Please add commas between the author and the work for all citations unless you can point me to an accepted citation style which omits punctuation between the two.
That system has been accepted at FAC for nine FAs I've nominated, but I've added the commas per your request.
Ealdgyth -
Talk 02:36, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Those are the final two items. Cheers,
Majoreditor (
talk) 00:46, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Job well done once again, Ealdgyth. GA Pass. Cheers,
Majoreditor (
talk) 02:55, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply
Very unimportant footnote to issue raised above re. punctuation in citations, just in case anyone's interested:
WP:CITE#HOW says: "There are a number of styles used in different fields. They all include the same information but vary in punctuation and the order of the author's name, publication date, title, and page numbers. Any of these styles is acceptable on Wikipedia so long as articles are internally consistent."
almost-
instinct 17:40, 19 February 2009 (UTC)reply