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10:46, 7 May 2012 (UTC)
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GA review (see
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here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written .
a (prose) : b (
MoS for
lead ,
layout ,
word choice ,
fiction , and
lists ) :
What does "≡" means? If and only if? And "∤" means "restriction to"?
"≡" in the context of this article denotes a
congruence on the integers. --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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18:47, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
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"∤" here means "does not divide" (it is listed at
List of mathematical symbols#Symbols ). --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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18:47, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
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I wikilinked the symbol "∤" to an article where it is explained. --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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18:32, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
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"log log x" a word too much or intentional?
This is intentional. It denotes the
logarithm of the logarithm of x. I added
parentheses for clarity
here . --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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18:47, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
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Similar uncommon units should be linked
What in particular do you think should be linked? --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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18:51, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
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Can you explain what does the small omega in the second table refers to? If you do this I am happy to pass this article.
Explained in
this edit . --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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20:21, 11 May 2012 (UTC)
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Red links should be created or explained in the article (for example, I don't know what a "Catalan pseudoprime" is)
Redlinks
First case of Fermat's last theorem and
Catalan pseudoprime eliminated by creating those articles. --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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20:51, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
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Non-english sources should be labelled as such.
Done . --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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19:25, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
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Suggest to remove the red links in the reference section, as it is unlikely they will be created.
Done . --
Toshio Yamaguchi (
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19:46, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
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It is factually accurate and
verifiable .
a (references) : b (citations to
reliable sources ) : c (
OR ) :
Overall ok
It is broad in its coverage .
a (major aspects) : b (focused) :
It follows the
neutral point of view policy .
Fair representation without bias :
It is stable .
No edit wars, etc. :
It is illustrated by
images , where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales ) : b (appropriate use with
suitable captions ) :
Overall : On hold to give you time fixing the problems.--
GoP
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11:43, 8 May 2012 (UTC) Pass
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Pass/Fail :
(Note): My common practice is to paste the template into the GAN. I often check points 5 and 6 (stability and pictures) before reviewing because they are easy to check. "Neutral" is confusing, as it may also mean that I did not review this points. Ok, now I will resume my review :)--
GoP
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11:14, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
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