The lead must be reduced to one to two paragraphs maximum, per
WP:LEAD and the article's prose size of 9 KB. I suggest reducing the composition info in the lead.
"which are said to be" -
WP:WEASELWORDS; be specific on who said it is such and such
MOS:LAYOUT discourages small sections. I suggest removing the subheadings in Reception.
Numbers above 9 are written as numerals per
WP:MOSNUM. Pay attention in the Chart performance section.
Charts and certification tables need formatting per
WP:ACCESS.
Prose issues
"with the latter also producing the track." - clumsy prose. "Priscilla Renea wrote the song with Emanuel Kiriakou, who produced the track."
Remove the words "several" and "numerous". They are considered too vague.
"The song charted in the top thirty in the United States" - "thirty" -> "30"
"the band released their debut album, Kiss & Tell, and quickly followed-up" – commas not needed.
"After the release of the latter Gomez said that she was not in a rush" - comma after "latter"
"Gomez would later call the song 'fun and empowering,' commenting 'Every time I sing this song, I'm like, 'I feel better already!'" - there should be a single quote mark (') after "already!" and there should be a comma after "commenting". The comma in "fun and empowering" should be moved to after the quotation mark.
iTunes Countdown does not need to be in italics.
"as in whereas the previous were dance-pop and club-oriented, "Who Says" draws from the teen pop genre"
The audio sample fails
WP:NFCC#8; it does not illustrate a specific concept of the song. It should illustrate musical elements, not lyrics. Find a better caption or remove.
I notified the nominator that the article was on hold. (S)he has made edits since then, but not in response to my review. The GAN has thus failed, sorry. Feel free to address issues and re-nominate. Cheers, —
WP:PENGUIN·[
TALK ]02:49, 13 December 2011 (UTC)reply
The lead must be reduced to one to two paragraphs maximum, per
WP:LEAD and the article's prose size of 9 KB. I suggest reducing the composition info in the lead.
"which are said to be" -
WP:WEASELWORDS; be specific on who said it is such and such
MOS:LAYOUT discourages small sections. I suggest removing the subheadings in Reception.
Numbers above 9 are written as numerals per
WP:MOSNUM. Pay attention in the Chart performance section.
Charts and certification tables need formatting per
WP:ACCESS.
Prose issues
"with the latter also producing the track." - clumsy prose. "Priscilla Renea wrote the song with Emanuel Kiriakou, who produced the track."
Remove the words "several" and "numerous". They are considered too vague.
"The song charted in the top thirty in the United States" - "thirty" -> "30"
"the band released their debut album, Kiss & Tell, and quickly followed-up" – commas not needed.
"After the release of the latter Gomez said that she was not in a rush" - comma after "latter"
"Gomez would later call the song 'fun and empowering,' commenting 'Every time I sing this song, I'm like, 'I feel better already!'" - there should be a single quote mark (') after "already!" and there should be a comma after "commenting". The comma in "fun and empowering" should be moved to after the quotation mark.
iTunes Countdown does not need to be in italics.
"as in whereas the previous were dance-pop and club-oriented, "Who Says" draws from the teen pop genre"
The audio sample fails
WP:NFCC#8; it does not illustrate a specific concept of the song. It should illustrate musical elements, not lyrics. Find a better caption or remove.
I notified the nominator that the article was on hold. (S)he has made edits since then, but not in response to my review. The GAN has thus failed, sorry. Feel free to address issues and re-nominate. Cheers, —
WP:PENGUIN·[
TALK ]02:49, 13 December 2011 (UTC)reply