Lead: "The song was written about...". This is a little confusing... Change to "Lyrically, the song talks about..." or something like "The song's lyrics recall...". See
Womanizer for an example. "its highest international peak being achieved in Germany, at number twenty-four". However, the song peaked at number two on Belgian Tip Singles Chart (Flanders).
Track listings: Title should be changed to Formats and track listings, since it was released on two formats (digital and cd). "AUS / FRA Digital Download" only references to AUS iTunes. What about FRA iTunes? Also, the Digital EP references to FRA iTunes, so isn't the correct title "FRA Digital EP"?
Sorry, I was reading the article again and noticed this things... I uploaded the sample a long time ago, but I can't reduce it since I'm reviewing the article.
Sauloviegas (
talk)
17:39, 7 February 2011 (UTC)reply
Lead: "The song was written about...". This is a little confusing... Change to "Lyrically, the song talks about..." or something like "The song's lyrics recall...". See
Womanizer for an example. "its highest international peak being achieved in Germany, at number twenty-four". However, the song peaked at number two on Belgian Tip Singles Chart (Flanders).
Track listings: Title should be changed to Formats and track listings, since it was released on two formats (digital and cd). "AUS / FRA Digital Download" only references to AUS iTunes. What about FRA iTunes? Also, the Digital EP references to FRA iTunes, so isn't the correct title "FRA Digital EP"?
Sorry, I was reading the article again and noticed this things... I uploaded the sample a long time ago, but I can't reduce it since I'm reviewing the article.
Sauloviegas (
talk)
17:39, 7 February 2011 (UTC)reply