No dablinks, no copyvio detected. Fairly well-written, only a few comments:
Background
Passions followed romantic and supernatural adventures in the fictional, coastal, New England town of Harmony A paraphrase of this would make a good start for this article, and later you will not have to say what "Harmony" means.
Don't leave paras unsourced. Use some inline citations so that verifiability is ensured. Also note that placing a ref. at the end of a lot of text means all of it is supported by this ref. (ref. 9 may thus be misconstrued) so this situation needs to be fixed.
Done. I added citations to episodes where necessary. I can't cite everything as certain sentences cover weeks, months, and sometimes years of the show, but I added the references to specific episodes when necessary.
Aoba47 (
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05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply
with her sister Simone Was she Whitney's only sibling? Mention the others
becoming known as Whitney Russell Harris-Crane This should be mentioned as an "a.k.a." name in the first line of the lead.
For soap opera characters, it is encouraged to use the common name for the character and I was discouraged from using maiden name or married names in the lead.
Aoba47 (
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05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply
You may like to use a few subheadings, as in
Ruth Archer.
Done. I was advised against subheadings in a previous review for a different soap opera character, but I prefer the subheadings too.
Aoba47 (
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05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply
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Sainsf: Thank you for the review! You have provided a lot of very helpful advice. I have addressed all your comments; let me know if there is anything else that needs to be changed/improved.
Aoba47 (
talk)
05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply
No dablinks, no copyvio detected. Fairly well-written, only a few comments:
Background
Passions followed romantic and supernatural adventures in the fictional, coastal, New England town of Harmony A paraphrase of this would make a good start for this article, and later you will not have to say what "Harmony" means.
Don't leave paras unsourced. Use some inline citations so that verifiability is ensured. Also note that placing a ref. at the end of a lot of text means all of it is supported by this ref. (ref. 9 may thus be misconstrued) so this situation needs to be fixed.
Done. I added citations to episodes where necessary. I can't cite everything as certain sentences cover weeks, months, and sometimes years of the show, but I added the references to specific episodes when necessary.
Aoba47 (
talk)
05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply
with her sister Simone Was she Whitney's only sibling? Mention the others
becoming known as Whitney Russell Harris-Crane This should be mentioned as an "a.k.a." name in the first line of the lead.
For soap opera characters, it is encouraged to use the common name for the character and I was discouraged from using maiden name or married names in the lead.
Aoba47 (
talk)
05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply
You may like to use a few subheadings, as in
Ruth Archer.
Done. I was advised against subheadings in a previous review for a different soap opera character, but I prefer the subheadings too.
Aoba47 (
talk)
05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply
@
Sainsf: Thank you for the review! You have provided a lot of very helpful advice. I have addressed all your comments; let me know if there is anything else that needs to be changed/improved.
Aoba47 (
talk)
05:01, 4 June 2016 (UTC)reply