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Reviewer: Status ( talk · contribs) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC) reply

• Lead is a bit on the short side. Surely it can be expanded on further?
  • How is it now?-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 07:37, 21 June 2012 (UTC) reply
• The two are clearly linked --> Bit of a lonely sentence.
  • Moved to where it belongs.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 07:20, 21 June 2012 (UTC) reply
• Information --> Description would be a more accurate title.
  • Fixed.-- TonyTheTiger ( T/ C/ BIO/ WP:CHICAGO/ WP:FOUR) 07:15, 21 June 2012 (UTC) reply
• I see no other issues with the article. It is well written and sourced.

• Great. All issues have been resolved. Passing the article! Statυs ( talk) 07:41, 21 June 2012 (UTC) reply

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There's way to much copyvio in the footnotes. The author should digest the information and and reword rather than use extensive quotes in footnotes. MathewTownsend ( talk) 21:34, 26 July 2012 (UTC) reply