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Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 16:40, 1 January 2022 (UTC) reply


I'll do this soon. ♦ jaguar 16:40, 1 January 2022 (UTC) reply

I spotted numerous instances of informal language and some cases where sentences could be merged to improve flow, but nothing too major. It is comprehensive and mostly well written. I'll leave this on hold until the above issues are fixed. jaguar 17:03, 1 January 2022 (UTC) reply

Thank you for addressing them so quickly. I've read through it again and am confident it now meets the GA criteria. Well done! jaguar 00:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Jaguar ( talk · contribs) 16:40, 1 January 2022 (UTC) reply


I'll do this soon. ♦ jaguar 16:40, 1 January 2022 (UTC) reply

I spotted numerous instances of informal language and some cases where sentences could be merged to improve flow, but nothing too major. It is comprehensive and mostly well written. I'll leave this on hold until the above issues are fixed. jaguar 17:03, 1 January 2022 (UTC) reply

Thank you for addressing them so quickly. I've read through it again and am confident it now meets the GA criteria. Well done! jaguar 00:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC) reply

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