I will review. I tend to make minor fixes myself instead of bothering to tell you to do it. If you are unhappy with any changes I make feel free to revert them and we will instead discuss the issue. Also please be advised this is my first GA review for an article about a song; it may be a bit of a learning curve for me.
Freikorp (
talk)
01:10, 21 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I'm passing this now. Article was very well written and layed out. I made many small changes and fixes while the nomination was open; you can see the majority of them here:
[1]. Well done.
Freikorp (
talk)
04:26, 22 December 2014 (UTC)reply
A. Prose is "
clear and
concise", without
copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
I stopped checking for close paraprhasing/copyright violations after the first column of references as there were no signs of any.
The only thing i'm still unsure of is the lead sentence "The dance-pop and pop song speak of Scherzinger singing that her body is aching for a man's touch." I don't think it's appropriate. "Aching for a man's touch" is a direct quote from one source only. Suggest complete rewording, or somehow attribute the words as a direct quote. I'm unsure of the best way to do this, so i'm going to leave it with you.
I will review. I tend to make minor fixes myself instead of bothering to tell you to do it. If you are unhappy with any changes I make feel free to revert them and we will instead discuss the issue. Also please be advised this is my first GA review for an article about a song; it may be a bit of a learning curve for me.
Freikorp (
talk)
01:10, 21 December 2014 (UTC)reply
I'm passing this now. Article was very well written and layed out. I made many small changes and fixes while the nomination was open; you can see the majority of them here:
[1]. Well done.
Freikorp (
talk)
04:26, 22 December 2014 (UTC)reply
A. Prose is "
clear and
concise", without
copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
I stopped checking for close paraprhasing/copyright violations after the first column of references as there were no signs of any.
The only thing i'm still unsure of is the lead sentence "The dance-pop and pop song speak of Scherzinger singing that her body is aching for a man's touch." I don't think it's appropriate. "Aching for a man's touch" is a direct quote from one source only. Suggest complete rewording, or somehow attribute the words as a direct quote. I'm unsure of the best way to do this, so i'm going to leave it with you.