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Reviewer: Tim riley ( talk · contribs) 17:45, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
Starting first read-through. More soonest.
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This is plainly of GA quality, and to my layman's eye looks well worth putting up for FAC in due course. A few minor points you may like to consider before I observe the present formalities:
That's my meagre harvest of gleanings. I shan't bother putting the review formally on hold for such trifling quibbles. Over to you and we can then perform the ceremony. – Tim riley talk 18:58, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
Thanks! Your comments were very helpful, especially the bit about however. I think I've addressed everything you mentioned, please let me know if you have any other suggestions.-- JFH ( talk) 02:36, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
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This is a top-notch article. On to FAC, I hope, and, if so, please ping me when you get there. Tim riley talk 07:49, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Tim riley ( talk · contribs) 17:45, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
Starting first read-through. More soonest.
Tim riley
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17:45, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
This is plainly of GA quality, and to my layman's eye looks well worth putting up for FAC in due course. A few minor points you may like to consider before I observe the present formalities:
That's my meagre harvest of gleanings. I shan't bother putting the review formally on hold for such trifling quibbles. Over to you and we can then perform the ceremony. – Tim riley talk 18:58, 24 November 2015 (UTC)
Thanks! Your comments were very helpful, especially the bit about however. I think I've addressed everything you mentioned, please let me know if you have any other suggestions.-- JFH ( talk) 02:36, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This is a top-notch article. On to FAC, I hope, and, if so, please ping me when you get there. Tim riley talk 07:49, 25 November 2015 (UTC)