They described each of them with different vocal range and styles, Byrne (husky voice), Egan (rock), Feehily (R&B), Filan (pop), McFadden (pop, R&B). - remove
This variations in voices are considered by the band as one of their edge among other musical groups around. - remove
"Double-figures in shortest time" - what does that even mean
"[4][5][6][7][8][9][10] - ugly, the lead shouldnt be sourced, instead it should be sourced in tontent of article.
Source 11 is no good, you need a much better source for such a claim.
Way to much wikilinking of the same words, some things dont need wikilinking at all.
Current sources 13,22,33,35 not formatted correctly.
Current sources 1,6,10,11,12,44,47,58,59,60,62,64 need replacing they are not reliable.
Over linking to GMTV - find some other sources
Please sort out these issues before i continue, the article is a long way off GA but i can take you through it step by step. For now its on hold, you have a week to sort out these issues. Cheers.
Realist2 (
'Come Speak To Me')
15:37, 30 April 2008 (UTC)reply
They described each of them with different vocal range and styles, Byrne (husky voice), Egan (rock), Feehily (R&B), Filan (pop), McFadden (pop, R&B). - remove
This variations in voices are considered by the band as one of their edge among other musical groups around. - remove
"Double-figures in shortest time" - what does that even mean
"[4][5][6][7][8][9][10] - ugly, the lead shouldnt be sourced, instead it should be sourced in tontent of article.
Source 11 is no good, you need a much better source for such a claim.
Way to much wikilinking of the same words, some things dont need wikilinking at all.
Current sources 13,22,33,35 not formatted correctly.
Current sources 1,6,10,11,12,44,47,58,59,60,62,64 need replacing they are not reliable.
Over linking to GMTV - find some other sources
Please sort out these issues before i continue, the article is a long way off GA but i can take you through it step by step. For now its on hold, you have a week to sort out these issues. Cheers.
Realist2 (
'Come Speak To Me')
15:37, 30 April 2008 (UTC)reply